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 Post subject: Amaya Clan
PostPosted: Mon Oct 23, 2017 9:07 pm 
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Bloodline Name: Kuebiko
Clan Name: Amaya
Leader: Bulo Amaya
Village: Sunagakure

Clan Description: Amaya are said to have originated from Sunagakure shinobi in hardy situations. It's said that the ancestors of the clan were daredevils who defended the village from deep in the desert. The older ninja would dig into the harshest sands of the Land of Wind to prepare to meet invaders or parties of profit for their home village. A family of the ancestors would continue the tradition and duty for generations to guard Sunagakure without adequate supplies. One day, it's said the patriarch of the Amaya had awakened to his bloodline on the brink of death. Through many days holding in thirst awaiting his enemies he was able to revive himself. From then on, Amaya had been able to survive through sheer will indefinitely within the Land of Wind. Additionally clansmen would begin to put their talents towards fixing the homes in Sunagakure. Most homes in Sunagakure are constructed flimsly - Amaya would use their abilities to point out potential disasters before they happen. Amaya can be truly best described as untold heroes.

Clansmen possess strong Earth Release abilities and have mostly thrown away their attachments to Wind Release. Amaya have completely adapted to the Land of Wind but lack fame within the shinobi countries as a whole. By their nature of defense, Amaya have capitalized on saving others to build up their clan's roots and relations over the years. For most of their history, Amaya have been successful in warding off those preying their bloodline due to only allies. Through natural evolution of their Kekkai Genkai, Amaya have made their greatest allies with Satetsu. Over Sunagakure's history, Satetsu have tended to be in the higher-ranking positions of the village while Amaya lay in the shadows. In terms of enemies - Shikome have tended to quall with Amaya often due to their contrasting bloodlines. Some jealous Shikome clan members have tried to even plunder the Amaya bloodline for themselves.

Clan Traits/Characteristics: All clan members are required to be tough to be recognized in the clan. Without physical and mental toughness - clansmen can't even activate their Kekkai Genkai. In fact, those without their Kekkai Genkai have been left to die in the harsh sandstorms of the Land of Wind. The recent clan patriarch Bulo is an exception - he was snatched from the clan when he was a young boy. Amaya usually wear loose or standard shinobi wear as they tend to be in the frontlines.
Clan Personality: Provocative and battle-crazy attitudes are prevalent in the clan due to lacking a fear of death in the Wind Country. Clansmen aren't particularly arrogant as they probe their opponents. They usually know their limits and what can endanger them in the Land of Wind. Outside of their land, Amaya tend to be cowardly from losing their advantage.

Bloodline Description: Kuebiko is a bloodline body aligned with Earth Release. The Amaya store Earth Release in their body to have more affinity with the element. Amaya have a first defining trait in that they can perform Earth Release in the Land of Wind by turning sand into full-fledged earth constructs if need be. Even those without sufficient constitution are attuned enough to change sand to earth with disregard for mass. Satetsu sand isn't capable of being turned into regular rocks. Affecting Satetsu sand at all isn't possible without the Amaya's Kuebiko reaching a sufficient stage to condense their body into earth.

Awakening the Amaya earth body requires proficient constitution - the limits of normal humans. The reason for the requirement in constitution is that an Amaya needs to hold back the Earth Release drawn into their body. Upon achieving proficient constitution - a person's will isn't taken into account as they're immediately baptized.

[Compression] [100 CP] A true marking of the Amaya on the world is that with their body they entirely compress Earth Release up to C-rank by touch. All compressed Earth Release refund chakra to the original user [excluding Amaya] - even opponents. The Kuebiko body becomes a home to Earth Release constantly compressing, and an Amaya can choose to directly compress the sands below them for a quick escape if need be. Amaya with their body awakened can now have Earth Release originate from their body like a Hozuki with Water Release. Most importantly, their clothes and organs aren't affected by their abilities.

[200 CP] Kuebiko is a bloodline naturally aligned with the world. At masterful constitution the Kuebiko bloodline grows. Amaya are able to compress Earth Release up to A-rank. All compressed Earth Release continues to be refunded. Masterful constitution Amaya don't need to breathe or eat as long as they're connected to earth as their body becomes aligned to earth.

[300 CP] At epic constitution the body is done growing and is in step with super qualities. Epic is the limit of the bloodline where the body can now sufficiently handle the full power of mother nature. All Earth Release techniques can now be compressed. The difference in the final stage is that [sensory] can be achieved if the users compress earth with people standing on it. At each time earth's compressed - Amaya can know the positioning of people touching Earth Release. Leaders of the clan usually have this level of the bloodline.

Bloodline Limits: -Compression restores the chakra of those who lost their technique - except for Amaya users. Compression is limited to 100m with a C-rank cost no matter the size.
-There's a contrary to a popular belief among clan children. Clansmen can't compress Shukaku simply due to the curse seals on it's body.
-Constitution is needed for the Kekkai Genkai's potential. Boosts are ineligible.
-Magnet Release used with metal still functions, or unaccounted for sand attacks.
-They can't create a foreign substance like oil in the Hozuki, as metal is a clan.

Clan Jutsu: ---

Number of Members Allowed: 5
Initial Members: Bulo Amaya


Last edited by Bulo Satetsu on Tue Oct 24, 2017 1:13 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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 Post subject: Re: Amaya Clan
PostPosted: Mon Oct 23, 2017 10:42 pm 
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None of this really makes much sense to me, apologies.

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Str: Legendary
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary
Coo: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Ref: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

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Ninjutsu Expert
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 Post subject: Re: Amaya Clan
PostPosted: Mon Oct 23, 2017 11:15 pm 
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Hiya Rei! Is that a denied and should I fix something? Went ahead to make an edit quickly after posting and I'll do anything too. I tried to look at other approved clans for reference. I'm not really familiar with the stats stuff. It's like Hozuki but Lightning Release could actually hurt this clan too. I noticed Shikome can't absorb Earth and figured it'd be an original idea.

I messed up though because the approved clans are canon ones. I'm not sure whether I'm even supposed to register custom ones. I should have asked. I'm new but I really think it'd be easier if people could register without a bloodline to pick one later. Sand seems to be the go-to for Sunagakure and I just wanted a custom option. Anything cool would work. I'm kind of outta interesting ideas for Sunagakure.


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 Post subject: Re: Amaya Clan
PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2017 8:46 am 
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Custom clans are allowed, but please see the following:

Various things are in need of balance. Generally bloodlines that come in stages like this require more CP investment, rather than becoming stronger automatically as your character grows in other ways.

One of the main reasons the Shikome cannot absorb Earth Release is because Earth Release techniques generally do not create anything from chakra and usually move and shape existing earth. Techniques that are an exception were not considered because they are an exception.

This clan does too much. Sensory, a free barrier, the ability to consume techniques and refresh chakra is basically just "a list of cool abilities I'd really like" rather than a singularly themed clan. I'd tell you to pick a single thing (probably not sensory, and probably not either of those last two without some strong balance). The barrier is interesting, however, and might be worth exploring for a 'tanky' kind of character. It would likely work better as a technique, though.

About your other suggestion - thanks for the input! Feedback is appreciated.

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Stats:
Str: Legendary
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary
Coo: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Ref: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

Skills:
Taijutsu Paragon
Fuuinjutsu Master
Ninjutsu Expert
Ijutsu Adept
Lay down, relax, come on how?
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 Post subject: Re: Amaya Clan
PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2017 1:31 pm 
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Thanks for the feedback Rei. It's great customs are allowed. Went ahead to frame the absorption to be something else. Challenged myself to remove the barrier. I've made the sensory portion less active. I've overcompensated the clan being unable to make techniques. I tried to isolate abilities to 2 per stage - instead of just having the clan be an earth absorb clan. Edited accordingly for CP and have tried to balance the clan.

I really think the tanky character idea is good but I'd have more success with Satetsu defense. It's easier to help comrades with too.

I'm aware the clan doesn't have one ability like you suggested! I've given up on the clan at this point. I wouldn't have much success with the clan having 1 ability. I'd be better off to just go Hozuki or Shikome. Shikome doesn't really fit me so I'll likely go Satetsu [which I mistakenly referred to as Sunba too].

Can I have your final thoughts on the clan's balance with edits?


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 Post subject: Re: Amaya Clan
PostPosted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 12:15 am 
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Sorry for the late reply, I asked Kye about it and his final thoughts of the matter were a dislike. I'm glad you got your character fixed though and wish you a lot of happy roleplaying!

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Welcome, human! Below you'll find my statistics, enjoy your stay..

Attributes:

Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
Mokuton
Suiton
Doton


Spent Character Points: 5000
Unspent Character Points: 0
Active Character Points: 5000


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