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PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2018 3:43 pm 
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Name: Chasing the past
Rank: (E-S) B
Cost: B cost C upkeep
Range: self
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Transformation
Handsigns: Dog → Boar → Ram
Lore/Flavor: In a bid to recapture her past joy of combat and the feelings of closeness with her partner she created an advanced transformation technique. This advanced form of the transformation technique uses chakra to transform her into an alternate version of herself wielding both possessed by heaven and claws of hell specifically maintaining the actual changes to her body while those states occur.
Description: First and foremost this technique grants her claws allowing her to use her signature fighting style. But more than that it grants her a minor advantage to her strength, constitution, coordination Reflex's, and Wisdom as the technique tries to copy the feeling of the techniques it is based upon.
Drawbacks: It would be useless if used with either of the techniques it is emulating because the technique isn't merely an enhancement but an attempted recreation of what she would already be going through. The technique also breaks upon a major disruption of concentration equivalent to a wound large enough to give any kind of penalties to attributes. The technique cannot be maintained while under a penalty from wounds or similar levels of distraction.
The deep sadness from realizing this technique isn't a real replacement for the real thing.

Edited both to further expand on why its weakness is the way it is and further cemented that it is a more advanced version of the transformation technique.

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Strength proficient (proficient major using fighting style)

constitution proficient (proficient major advantage using fighting style)

Stamina legendary minor (godlike minor while using taijutsu)

Reflexes proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion)

Coordination proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion, masterful minor when attacking vitals or performing ninjutsu)

Wisdom proficient minor (masterful minor taijutsu. masterful major major fighting style)
Tracking Godlike major advantage
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2019 6:32 pm 
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The point wasn't that any transformation above E was an advanced form. Point was that nearly all instances you mentioned weren't the regular transformation technique.

Most of those instances you're talking about are advanced forms. The rest seems kinda off the point I was trying to make.

To cut straight to the point though, yes, all I wanted was for you to make it an advanced transformation technique. With that said, the above is approved.

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Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2019 5:03 am 
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ty for the assist, sorry for the excessive amount of information, i just wasn't sure what part i had gotten wrong and wanted to explain my confusion. Still i am glad it was a simple issue.

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Attributes for the two at base.
Strength proficient (proficient major using fighting style)

constitution proficient (proficient major advantage using fighting style)

Stamina legendary minor (godlike minor while using taijutsu)

Reflexes proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion)

Coordination proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion, masterful minor when attacking vitals or performing ninjutsu)

Wisdom proficient minor (masterful minor taijutsu. masterful major major fighting style)
Tracking Godlike major advantage
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2019 7:23 pm 
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Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
Mokuton
Suiton
Doton


Spent Character Points: 5000
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2019 3:48 pm 
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Name: Beast Style: Adaptive Evolution
Rank: S
Cost: Costs 40 then 20 for each upkeep after. paid for with the gelel stone stamina refresh.
Range: 0
Type: gelel technique
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary, Summoning
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: While Gelel stones have been used in the past for minor tricks like stamina regeneration and as propulsion devices, their true purpose is to enact an unstable evolutionary metamorphosis eerily similar to a curse seal transformation. Flay abusing his own clan's already unstable cell structure has taken this transformation one step further by using it to further the possession of both Sulphur and Rose by focusing the growth of their possessed cells and moving them throughout his body.
Description: By expending the gelel stone's stamina refresh to fuel the technique the user instantly begins a costly metamorphosis, although the use of this technique does heal a moderate wound like that of the stamina refresh use they cannot gain stamina from this metamorphosis. First and foremost the possession of Sulphur and Rose spread across the whole body of the user turning their skin into a black and brown tie dye. This grants the power of both techniques across the whole body, rather than limited to the arms they normally possess, but as the three are truly merged together it grants each of them the senory organs of the others while they are merged. This isn't a true merging; however, as their minds are still separate and still need to communicate with each other. Other physical appearance changes include moving the Eye on the user's left hand to their forehead, the wings on their right arm moving to their back, the ears on their right shoulder move to the top of the head, and the claw on the left arm grows to match the size of the claw on the left.

Like a tier two curse seal the technique grants a major advantage to every physical stat and 10 advantages to distribute as they wish. (once chosen the 10 advantages are set in stone for every time they use the technique).
In flay's case he is adding a major advantage to strength, a tier minor to constitution, a tier to coordination, and a minor advantage to reflex's. It also grants the user access to gelel techniques.
Drawbacks: The biggest cost of this technique is that it is fueled on the stamina refresh of the gelel stone. Instead of refreshing the user's stamina it uses the stamina points the user would have gained to fuel this technique at a cost of 40 points and then 20 points of would have been refreshed stamina per post, however the technique also acts a beacon of chakra so strong that even those without sensory abilities can feel it, letting them immediately know the direction of the chakra within the same topic as the user. Notably those with an minor in sensory using an active sensory technique will be able to feel the chakra expenditure from a sub topic away, those with a major in sensory will be able to passively sense it from a sub topic away and actively sense it if they are in the same region. Similarly those with a master in sensory will be able to passively sense it from the same region and actively sense it from anywhere. This makes the technique the opposite of stealthy and the user actively track able during the moments of its activation. The use of this technique also puts a strain on the users body. Not as badly as curse seal given the chakra is paid for in full, but the user is disabled for the full post the metamorphosis ends and falls unconcious for 5 posts - 1 post for every tier the user's constitution is above average, although healing techniques like the body revival technique can keep the user from suffering this disadvantage the user doesn't gain any benefits of the technique for as long as they would suffer the exhaustion.

Source for this idea https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Stone_of_Gelel
"The stone's power can also allow the users to transform into a monstrous form unique to each person, increasing their strength and prowess, as demonstrated by Haido and his followers (excluding Temujin), an aspect similar to Orochimaru's Juinjutsu."

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Attributes for the two at base.
Strength proficient (proficient major using fighting style)

constitution proficient (proficient major advantage using fighting style)

Stamina legendary minor (godlike minor while using taijutsu)

Reflexes proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion)

Coordination proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion, masterful minor when attacking vitals or performing ninjutsu)

Wisdom proficient minor (masterful minor taijutsu. masterful major major fighting style)
Tracking Godlike major advantage
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Flay This is flay's "dialog"
Anna This is Anna's "dialog"
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2019 3:53 pm 
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We never intended this Restricted Item to mimic another Restricted Ability (a fully invested Curse Seal). Apologies, but this is too strong, especially as it is essentially free (I understand how the cost for the technique works, and there is a reason that it is desirable to do it this way). Denied, sorry.

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They can make you fear
That no one will hear us sing our songs
The truth is relevant, but not for long
This love is our downfall


Stats:
Str: Epic (Legendary with Taijutsu)
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary (Major Advantage with Taijutsu)
Coo: Legendary (Godlike, Minor Advantage with Taijutsu)
Ref: Ascendant
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

Might: 6
Will: 2
Fate: 6

Skills:
Taijutsu Paragon
Fuuinjutsu Grandmaster
Ninjutsu Master
Genjutsu Expert
Ijutsu Adept

I'm sorry
But the hurt's not going away
I'll bury all the past
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2019 4:04 pm 
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I mean its 2 S ranks with some flavor to it I could just write up 2 tech's that do that, but i figured I would do it in a lore friendly way. Its not even a S rank curse seal. it would be the equivalent of a C rank curse seal. its 18 advantages for 2 S rank (9) advantage techniques with a number of negatives. The only bonus is that it makes 2 bad S rank techniques (claw of hell) and (possessed by heaven) the equivalent of two regular S ranks.

Or a more direct reply. I understand why you could see it as desirable to do it this way, but desirable doesn't mean broken. The act of accessing a gelel stone doesn't take any preparation or overt action in the anime or listed in the forum, so given going into taijutsu doubles my stamina pool activating the technique's at the beginning of the fight and refreshing my stamina pool half way through or activating this at the beginning of a fight are the exact same thing. Allow me to show you.

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Strength proficient (proficient major using fighting style)

constitution proficient (proficient major advantage using fighting style)

Stamina legendary minor (godlike minor while using taijutsu)

Reflexes proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion)

Coordination proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion, masterful minor when attacking vitals or performing ninjutsu)

Wisdom proficient minor (masterful minor taijutsu. masterful major major fighting style)
Tracking Godlike major advantage
Character update page viewtopic.php?f=305&t=14750
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Flay This is flay's "dialog"
Anna This is Anna's "dialog"
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2019 10:43 pm 
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Just make two S-ranks, then.

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They can make you fear
That no one will hear us sing our songs
The truth is relevant, but not for long
This love is our downfall


Stats:
Str: Epic (Legendary with Taijutsu)
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary (Major Advantage with Taijutsu)
Coo: Legendary (Godlike, Minor Advantage with Taijutsu)
Ref: Ascendant
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

Might: 6
Will: 2
Fate: 6

Skills:
Taijutsu Paragon
Fuuinjutsu Grandmaster
Ninjutsu Master
Genjutsu Expert
Ijutsu Adept

I'm sorry
But the hurt's not going away
I'll bury all the past
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 01, 2019 8:56 pm 
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I will, its just a lot less cool, creative, interesting, or even really lore friendly; however, I will. Done though i wrote these in a row, so there might be blatant errors with them.

Name: Second Step to Mastery: Chimeric Strength
Rank: (E-S) S
Cost: 20, 10
Range: 2m?
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Ijutsu,
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: none But it requires 3 handseals in time.
Lore/Flavor: By studying the partial transformation of Chasing the past, the material manipulation of Assimilate all creation, and the intricate chakra manipulation of the technique Claws of Hell, the twins have managed to create a technique that recreates its physiological changes across the body.
Description: The users skin turns the shade of Sulphur's fur; turning black with white tips, as their finger nails and toe nails grow into thick clawed tips. Much like the original. This transformation grants a tier to reflex's and strength, as well a minor advantage in constitution, wisdom, and coordination.
Drawbacks: This technique is hard on the body. Because of the strain on the body the technique will instantly fail if a major non fatal wound is inflicted on the user and they suffer a minor disadvantage to constitution every time this technique is disrupted in the same topic until they are healed for one post per minor disadvantage. Mentally this technique is not easy to maintain either and anything that pierces your pain threshold will also cause you to drop the technique.

Name: Third Step to Mastery: Chimeric Wisdom
Rank: (E-S) S
Cost: 20, 10
Range: 2m?
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Ijutsu,
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: none But it requires 3 handseals in time.
Lore/Flavor: By studying the partial transformation of Chasing the past, the material manipulation of Assimilate all creation, and the intricate chakra manipulation of the technique possessed by heaven, the twins have managed to create a technique that recreates its physiological changes across the body.
Description: The users skin turns the shade of Rose's fur; turning a soft brown, as their finger nails and toe nails grow into thick clawed tips. Much like the original. This transformation grants a tier to coordination and wisdom, as well a minor advantage in constitution, strength, and reflex's.
Drawbacks: This technique is hard on the body. Because of the strain on the body the technique will instantly fail if a major non fatal wound is inflicted on the user and they suffer a minor disadvantage to constitution every time this technique is disrupted in the same topic until they are healed for one post per minor disadvantage. Mentally this technique is not easy to maintain either and anything that pierces your pain threshold will also cause you to drop the technique.

Name: Fourth Step to Mastery: Chimeric sight
Rank: (E-S) C
Cost: 5, 2
Range: 40 meters
Type: Ijutsu, Sensory
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: Rat, Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After studying the experimental operation Flay and Anna's father performed on rose and Sulphur they managed to recreate Sulphur's low light vision.
Description: This sensory technique alters the users eyes enhancing the cones and physically turning the users scelra red, before it releases a light wave of chakra granting the user the ability to see in the dark.
Drawbacks: The chakra released from the eyes causes them to glow in the dark allowing those who are looking for them the knowledge of where the user is

Name: Fifth Step to Mastery: Chimeric Hearing
Rank: (E-S) C
Cost: 5, 3
Range: 40m
Type: Ninjutsu, sensory,
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: Boar, Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After studying the experimental operation Flay and Anna's father performed on rose and Sulphur they managed to recreate Roses Sonaresque hearing.
Description: This technique involves the user creating a cat shaped chakra flow around their ears that act as an enlarged Concha and ear canal granting the user enhanced hearing likened to that of Rose, who can hear any non silent movement within 40 meters.
Drawbacks: Enhancing ones hearing has downsides, most notably a surprise attack that relies on over powering sound will immediately and semi permanently deafen the individual. While deafened the individual suffers the effects of a major non fatal wound until healed.

Name: Sixth Step to Mastery: Water Style Perfect Respiration
Rank: (E-S) A
Cost: 15, 10
Range: 0/self?
Type: Ijutsu, ninjutsu
Sub-type: Defensive, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Water
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: Serpent, Monkey, Dog, Rooster
Lore/Flavor: An advanced version of the underwater breathing technique, this aquatic ninjutsu covers the users mouth, throat and lungs in a thin film of water, that increases the rate at which the users lungs can harvest oxygen in the body, allowing the user to push their respiratory system to produce more Aerobic ATP.
Description: This technique coats the users mouth throat and lungs with a light film of water, increasing the amount of energy the body has, allowing it to be pushed longer than normal and with better efficiency without suffering an oxygen tax. This technique grants a tier minor advantage to coordination and a tier to reflex's to represent the effects of a higher oxygen environment.
Drawbacks: If this technique is used in an already high oxygen environment the user will not gain the benefits of this technique and will suffer from headaches that cause a tier loss to wisdom.

Name: The Seventh step to Mastery: Water Style Cardiovascular Mastery
Rank: S
Cost: 20, 15
Range: 0/self
Type: Ijutsu taijutsu ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: water
Notation: (Hiden, Secret Technique, Kinjutsu, Kekkei Genkai, etc.)
Handsigns: rooster dog monkey serpent
Lore/Flavor: Cardiovascular mastery is a technique that pushes the users cardiovascular system to its most extreme levels, while also regulating the bodies natural homeostatic nature to balance the heat produced from its muscles throughout the body.
Description: This technique works to both regulate heat throughout the body keeping muscles cooler as they operate by diffusing most of the heat into the ninja's armor and skin making them extra warm to the touch. It also pushes the heart, liver, and kidney's to operate much faster than normally safe, while temporarily strengthening the marrow in the users bones granting them additional durability. This grants a tier minor advantage to strength and a tier major advantage to constitution.
Drawbacks: This technique can easily strain the users body and if the user attempts to maintain it while distracted they suffer a major not obviously fatal injury as the capillaries in their body burst and their bones splinter.

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Attributes for the two at base.
Strength proficient (proficient major using fighting style)

constitution proficient (proficient major advantage using fighting style)

Stamina legendary minor (godlike minor while using taijutsu)

Reflexes proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion)

Coordination proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion, masterful minor when attacking vitals or performing ninjutsu)

Wisdom proficient minor (masterful minor taijutsu. masterful major major fighting style)
Tracking Godlike major advantage
Character update page viewtopic.php?f=305&t=14750
Chat Legend/Key
Flay This is flay's "dialog"
Anna This is Anna's "dialog"
Isobul This is Isobul's "dialog
Sulpher This is Sulpher's "dialog"
Rose This is Rose's "dialog"
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 02, 2019 12:37 am 
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Please. No matter how short or long they are, limit your customs to 3 per post.

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Attributes:

Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
Mokuton
Suiton
Doton


Spent Character Points: 5000
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 07, 2019 12:10 am 
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Just incase that was a request and not a suggestion for next time here I shall break them up into chunks.
Quote:
Name: Second Step to Mastery: Chimeric Strength
Rank: (E-S) S
Cost: 20, 10
Range: 2m?
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Ijutsu,
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: none But it requires 3 handseals in time.
Lore/Flavor: By studying the partial transformation of Chasing the past, the material manipulation of Assimilate all creation, and the intricate chakra manipulation of the technique Claws of Hell, the twins have managed to create a technique that recreates its physiological changes across the body.
Description: The users skin turns the shade of Sulphur's fur; turning black with white tips, as their finger nails and toe nails grow into thick clawed tips. Much like the original. This transformation grants a tier to reflex's and strength, as well a minor advantage in constitution, wisdom, and coordination.
Drawbacks: This technique is hard on the body. Because of the strain on the body the technique will instantly fail if a major non fatal wound is inflicted on the user and they suffer a minor disadvantage to constitution every time this technique is disrupted in the same topic until they are healed for one post per minor disadvantage. Mentally this technique is not easy to maintain either and anything that pierces your pain threshold will also cause you to drop the technique.



Name: Fourth Step to Mastery: Chimeric sight
Rank: (E-S) C
Cost: 5, 2
Range: 40 meters
Type: Ijutsu, Sensory
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: Rat, Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After studying the experimental operation Flay and Anna's father performed on rose and Sulphur they managed to recreate Sulphur's low light vision.
Description: This sensory technique alters the users eyes enhancing the cones and physically turning the users scelra red, before it releases a light wave of chakra granting the user the ability to see in the dark.
Drawbacks: The chakra released from the eyes causes them to glow in the dark allowing those who are looking for them the knowledge of where the user is

Name: Fifth Step to Mastery: Chimeric Hearing
Rank: (E-S) C
Cost: 5, 3
Range: 40m
Type: Ninjutsu, sensory,
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: Boar, Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After studying the experimental operation Flay and Anna's father performed on rose and Sulphur they managed to recreate Roses Sonaresque hearing.
Description: This technique involves the user creating a cat shaped chakra flow around their ears that act as an enlarged Concha and ear canal granting the user enhanced hearing likened to that of Rose, who can hear any non silent movement within 40 meters.
Drawbacks: Enhancing ones hearing has downsides, most notably a surprise attack that relies on over powering sound will immediately and semi permanently deafen the individual. While deafened the individual suffers the effects of a major non fatal wound until healed.


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Attributes for the two at base.
Strength proficient (proficient major using fighting style)

constitution proficient (proficient major advantage using fighting style)

Stamina legendary minor (godlike minor while using taijutsu)

Reflexes proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion)

Coordination proficient (proficient major fighting style, masterful evasion, masterful minor when attacking vitals or performing ninjutsu)

Wisdom proficient minor (masterful minor taijutsu. masterful major major fighting style)
Tracking Godlike major advantage
Character update page viewtopic.php?f=305&t=14750
Chat Legend/Key
Flay This is flay's "dialog"
Anna This is Anna's "dialog"
Isobul This is Isobul's "dialog
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Rose This is Rose's "dialog"
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 07, 2019 1:59 am 
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It was a request yes. First technique will need a 15 SP upkeep. Define ‘pain threshold’ in your drawbacks pls. For example, if you had Epic con, what exactly would ‘pierce lain threshold’ mean in this situation?

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Name: Fourth Step to Mastery: Chimeric sight
Rank: (E-S) C
Cost: 5, 2
Range: 40 meters
Type: Ijutsu, Sensory
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: Rat, Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After studying the experimental operation Flay and Anna's father performed on rose and Sulphur they managed to recreate Sulphur's low light vision.
Description: This sensory technique alters the users eyes enhancing the cones and physically turning the users scelra red, before it releases a light wave of chakra granting the user the ability to see in the dark.
Drawbacks: The chakra released from the eyes causes them to glow in the dark allowing those who are looking for them the knowledge of where the user is
^ second one approved.

Third one, define the effects of a major non fatal wound. What does that mean for someone that has just been deafened?

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Attributes:

Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
Mokuton
Suiton
Doton


Spent Character Points: 5000
Unspent Character Points: 0
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 07, 2019 3:03 am 
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for the first one pain threshold is as it is implied in constitution, which in itself is vague.
Proficient Constitution: Your body is that of a vigorously healthy human. You can ignore some amounts of pain
Masterful Constitution: Your body is beginning to extend human limits. You can ignore large amounts of pain
Epic Constitution: Your body transcends human durability. You shrug off almost all pain, and only the most major of wounds can pierce through your ability to do so.
Legendary Constitution: Your body is completely superhuman. You shrug off all pain
Godlike Constitution: Your body is godly. You shrug off any pain.
For legendary and godlike constitution you would want to use a technique that lowers the users effective constitution to make this kind of disable viable; however, pain isn't the only way to cancel the technique. A major non fatal wound would be the equivalent of broken bones or the like. I had hoped the massive weakness would balance it so that it was cheaper than a standard S rank technique without weakness's, but if they aren't enough in combination with the constitution drain then I will bump up the cost to 15.

Name: Second Step to Mastery: Chimeric Strength
Rank: (E-S) S
Cost: 20, 15
Range: 2m?
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Ijutsu,
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: none But it requires 3 handseals in time.
Lore/Flavor: By studying the partial transformation of Chasing the past, the material manipulation of Assimilate all creation, and the intricate chakra manipulation of the technique Claws of Hell, the twins have managed to create a technique that recreates its physiological changes across the body.
Description: The users skin turns the shade of Sulphur's fur; turning black with white tips, as their finger nails and toe nails grow into thick clawed tips. Much like the original. This transformation grants a tier to reflex's and strength, as well a minor advantage in constitution, wisdom, and coordination.
Drawbacks: This technique is hard on the body. Because of the strain on the body the technique will instantly fail if a major non fatal wound is inflicted on the user and they suffer a minor disadvantage to constitution every time this technique is disrupted in the same topic until they are healed for one post per minor disadvantage. Mentally this technique is not easy to maintain either and anything that pierces the users pain threshold will also cause you to drop the technique.

As for the third technique: the deafness; mechanically it would act like a broken bone (as it is a ruptured ear drum) or another major injury (like broken bones) that applies a minus 1 tier for those with epic con or lower and require the same level of healing technique to heal.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 07, 2019 5:50 pm 
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I see, yeah bump up the cost and It’s good to go!
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Name: Fifth Step to Mastery: Chimeric Hearing
Rank: (E-S) C
Cost: 5, 3
Range: 40m
Type: Ninjutsu, sensory,
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: Boar, Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After studying the experimental operation Flay and Anna's father performed on rose and Sulphur they managed to recreate Roses Sonaresque hearing.
Description: This technique involves the user creating a cat shaped chakra flow around their ears that act as an enlarged Concha and ear canal granting the user enhanced hearing likened to that of Rose, who can hear any non silent movement within 40 meters.
Drawbacks: Enhancing ones hearing has downsides, most notably a surprise attack that relies on over powering sound will immediately and semi permanently deafen the individual. While deafened the individual suffers the effects of a major non fatal wound until healed.
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Name: Third Step to Mastery: Chimeric Wisdom
Rank: (E-S) S
Cost: 20, 15
Range: 2m?
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Ijutsu,
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: none But it requires 3 handseals in time.
Lore/Flavor: By studying the partial transformation of Chasing the past, the material manipulation of Assimilate all creation, and the intricate chakra manipulation of the technique possessed by heaven, the twins have managed to create a technique that recreates its physiological changes across the body.
Description: The users skin turns the shade of Rose's fur; turning a soft brown, as their finger nails and toe nails grow into thick clawed tips. Much like the original. This transformation grants a tier to coordination and wisdom, as well a minor advantage in constitution, strength, and reflex's.
Drawbacks: This technique is hard on the body. Because of the strain on the body the technique will instantly fail if a major non fatal wound is inflicted on the user and they suffer a minor disadvantage to constitution every time this technique is disrupted in the same topic until they are healed for one post per minor disadvantage. Mentally this technique is not easy to maintain either and anything that pierces your pain threshold will also cause you to drop the technique.


Name: Sixth Step to Mastery: Water Style Perfect Respiration
Rank: (E-S) A
Cost: 15, 10
Range: 0/self?
Type: Ijutsu, ninjutsu
Sub-type: Defensive, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Water
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: Serpent, Monkey, Dog, Rooster
Lore/Flavor: An advanced version of the underwater breathing technique, this aquatic ninjutsu covers the users mouth, throat and lungs in a thin film of water, that increases the rate at which the users lungs can harvest oxygen in the body, allowing the user to push their respiratory system to produce more Aerobic ATP.
Description: This technique coats the users mouth throat and lungs with a light film of water, increasing the amount of energy the body has, allowing it to be pushed longer than normal and with better efficiency without suffering an oxygen tax. This technique grants a tier minor advantage to coordination and a tier to reflex's to represent the effects of a higher oxygen environment.
Drawbacks: If this technique is used in an already high oxygen environment the user will not gain the benefits of this technique and will suffer from headaches that cause a tier loss to wisdom.

Name: The Seventh step to Mastery: Water Style Cardiovascular Mastery
Rank: S
Cost: 20, 15
Range: 0/self
Type: Ijutsu taijutsu ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: water
Notation: (Hiden, Secret Technique, Kinjutsu, Kekkei Genkai, etc.)
Handsigns: rooster dog monkey serpent
Lore/Flavor: Cardiovascular mastery is a technique that pushes the users cardiovascular system to its most extreme levels, while also regulating the bodies natural homeostatic nature to balance the heat produced from its muscles throughout the body.
Description: This technique works to both regulate heat throughout the body keeping muscles cooler as they operate by diffusing most of the heat into the ninja's armor and skin making them extra warm to the touch. It also pushes the heart, liver, and kidney's to operate much faster than normally safe, while temporarily strengthening the marrow in the users bones granting them additional durability. This grants a tier minor advantage to strength and a tier major advantage to constitution.
Drawbacks: This technique can easily strain the users body and if the user attempts to maintain it while distracted they suffer a major not obviously fatal injury as the capillaries in their body burst and their bones splinter.
distraction constitutes surpassing the pain threshold or the surprise conditions listed in the Master of 1000 styles parent fighting style

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 13, 2019 6:19 am 
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Name: Third Step to Mastery: Chimeric Wisdom
Rank: (E-S) S
Cost: 20, 15
Range: 2m?
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Ijutsu,
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Hiden
Handsigns: none But it requires 3 handseals in time.
Lore/Flavor: By studying the partial transformation of Chasing the past, the material manipulation of Assimilate all creation, and the intricate chakra manipulation of the technique possessed by heaven, the twins have managed to create a technique that recreates its physiological changes across the body.
Description: The users skin turns the shade of Rose's fur; turning a soft brown, as their finger nails and toe nails grow into thick clawed tips. Much like the original. This transformation grants a tier to coordination and wisdom, as well a minor advantage in constitution, strength, and reflex's.
Drawbacks: This technique is hard on the body. Because of the strain on the body the technique will instantly fail if a major non fatal wound is inflicted on the user and they suffer a minor disadvantage to constitution every time this technique is disrupted in the same topic until they are healed for one post per minor disadvantage. Mentally this technique is not easy to maintain either and anything that pierces your pain threshold will also cause you to drop the technique.
This is approved ^

Gimme a day for the other two pls, checking something out before I wanna give my verdict on those

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 20, 2019 6:59 pm 
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I realize your rather busy, but Baump

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 1:29 am 
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Not me, slow response from others, rip my dude. Anyway I’ll continue without others their view.

Second tech, coordination and reflex boost doesn’t make sense. I’d remove thise and lower the technique’s cost appropriately.

What? That’s not how the cardiovascular system works. Even at its most extreme levels would your bone marrows not become stronger, nor does your speed increase. Your endurance ends up higher, sure and I’d recommend doing something around that.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 3:52 pm 
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In terms of removing the reflex and coordination buff, the technique would essentially not function. After all the technique (the underwater breathing technique) recycles air indefinitely without taking in any new chemicals. I also get the misrepresentation of science if someone merely assumed that taking in more oxygen actually made them better in some way. But the second half of the technique is about enhancing the ATP cycle in the Mitochondria (or the ijutsu half of the technique). If you body could some how both take in and process oxygen faster, it would increase the aerobic ATP cycle which would make you both more coordinated (as you wouldn't feel tired in combat), and give you higher reflex's (as your muscles would expand and contract faster and with less resistance building up) by factorials.

To make this simpler I shall adjust the ability to reflect that change. Bold is the change

Name: Sixth Step to Mastery: Water Style Perfect Respiration
Rank: (E-S) A
Cost: 15, 10
Range: 0/self?
Type: Ijutsu, ninjutsu
Sub-type: Defensive, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Water
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: Serpent, Monkey, Dog, Rooster
Lore/Flavor: An advanced version of the underwater breathing technique, this aquatic ninjutsu covers the users mouth, throat and lungs in a thin film of water, that increases the rate at which the users lungs can harvest oxygen in the body and pushes the bodies Mitochondria, to perform the aerobic water producing cycle faster than normal.

Description: This technique coats the users mouth throat and lungs with a light film of water, enhancing the lungs ability to take in and recycle oxygen much like the underwater breathing technique, while also speeding up the water aerobic respiration process of the mitochondria allowing it to be pushed longer than normal and with better efficiency without suffering an oxygen tax of the individuals muscles. This technique grants a tier minor advantage to coordination and a tier to reflex's to represent the effects of maintaining Aerobic cellular respiration while in combat and how it allows the individual to push their muscles for longer and faster without suffering the build up of lactic acid.

(In real life this would increase the individuals stamina by a near limitless amount, as well as allow the user to push their body to the limits essentially all the time, and allow the body to keep up high stress exercise nearly endlessly (until your tendons snapped and your bones broke), but the site nix's stamina buffs, so given this is a cardio based not strength based it would be closer to reflex's and coordination rather than strength and constitution)

Drawbacks: With this longer term explanation there wouldn't be a real life negative side effect that wouldn't be traced back to the space magic side of things, as the person wouldn't be burning more fat than usual just more efficiently then before and the amount of energy produced would be much higher, so I think the best negative is the one from first step to mastery.

even after sixth step to mastery is over the body will still try to emulate its new rate of cellular respiration. In short this means that the user will feel tired and sluggish suffering a major advantage loss to reflex's and coordination the post after this technique ends, unless the upkeep for this ability is paid for for an additional post, so that the body can cool down.


As for the second technique It was more about homeostasis, which is a part of what the cardiovascular system does with a secondary focus on increasing blood flow and red blood cell production by increasing the bone marrow in ones blood, which would have the side effect of increasing someone's durability read constitution. That being said i completely rewrote the technique into something more direct.

It isn't in bold because all of it is new.

Name: The Seventh step to Mastery: Water Style muscle coolant
Rank: S
Cost: 15 intial, 15 upkeep
Range: 0/self
Type: Ijutsu taijutsu ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: water
Notation: (Hiden, Secret Technique, Kinjutsu, Kekkei Genkai, etc.)
Handsigns: rooster dog monkey serpent
Lore/Flavor: Contrary to the title this technique actually performs three different processes and stages that activate in sequential order.

The first stage: It uses chakra to rapidly reinforce and repair the users bones and tendons allowing them to take more pressure from from both internal and external stresses without breaking or snapping.

The Second stage uses chakra to regulate nerve impulses, allowing the user to access more muscle fiber than should normally be available, granting them increased strength.

The third stage: uses water chakra to regulate homeostatic environment of the body, allowing the body to push its muscle fibers harder and take more abuse without burning up due to the increased muscle use. Someone in the third stage's body would appear pinker than usual and warm to the touch as the excess heat leaves their body.

Description:
The first stage of this technique simply reinforces the nerves and bones in the users body, granting the user a tier minor advantage to constitution.

The second stage of this technique grants the user greater control of their muscle fibers outside of that which is safe for a normal human body, granting an additional tier to strength.

The third stage reinforces the other two stages, by regulating the heat build up in the body, enhancing the user's strength and constitution by an additional minor advantage, due to the increased efficiency.

Drawback. This technique has one major drawback. Each stage is activated sequentially as the technique goes on and any interruption to this progress starts it entirely over again. Someone that can disrupt techniques could easily force the user to pay an A rank cost for a B rank booster over and over again. Similarly if the user stops using the technique for some reason then it also starts all over again. More importantly if the technique is stopped during stage two, the user receives a major disadvantage to strength and constitution until healed, due to muscle damage, due to muscle fibers burning up.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 30, 2019 11:00 pm 
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Coordination still doesn’t make sense on the first one, no matter how I look at it, I don’t see why your accuracy and so on would increase.

Second tech is fine but one question. Or two. How long does it take to enter each stage? Once interrupted you must always pay the activation cost to restart it from stage 1, yes?

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 31, 2019 9:33 pm 
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The technical answer for number 1, is that it stops you from suffering a degradation from coordination caused by pushing your body. Something that happens all but immediately in high stress situations in real life. Between adrenaline, and your bodies demand for oxygen. when someone gets pushed into sudden high intensity situations the first thing to go is generally perception, as it tunnel visions due to a lack of resources and it often requires training and muscle control to gain back most of that (the numbers this technique gives implies it gives back more than is normally humanly possible). In real life the average delay for even the presidents trained body guards is still a few seconds, as their body tries to sense what to do. In this case if someones body could process more oxygen it would have an easier time dealing with this sudden burst of required attention, because it could keep up with higher energy demands.
But that is more using a physiological change to deal with a psychological action.

The other reason is that, it turns your anaerobic actions which are harder for your body to control into aerobic actions. The increase in efficiency has to do with muscle control and the technique increases the users muscle control (something that normally happens with years of training and muscle building) Either way it is more equating being able to focus and concentrate longer and more consistently with coordination, because it can't be stamina, which would more likely see the change instead.

In short such a change would likely make you faster, stronger, more perceptive, probably smarter, and give you limitless stamina in real life (literally everything but durability); as the body is a machine where the efficiency of every part is interrelated to the others. Because this is a game i focused on reflexes and coordination.

question or two: 1 stage a post and yes.

P.S. I just realized most of what I said for 1 boils down to if your body has more energy it can devote more energy to paying attention in combat, much like how in severe danger it can slow down your perception of time which is heavily taxing for your brain in real life. <--(whether energy is the only reason why its taxing on your body or not is outside of my field of knowledge as I am not a neuro scientists yet, but the answer is probably its not and i deign to fall back on space magic)

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Name: Sixth Step to Mastery: Water Style Perfect Respiration
Rank: (E-S) A
Cost: 15, 10
Range: 0/self?
Type: Ijutsu, ninjutsu
Sub-type: Defensive, Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Water
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: Serpent, Monkey, Dog, Rooster
Lore/Flavor: An advanced version of the underwater breathing technique, this aquatic ninjutsu covers the users mouth, throat and lungs in a thin film of water, that increases the rate at which the users lungs can harvest oxygen in the body and pushes the bodies Mitochondria, to perform the aerobic water producing cycle faster than normal.

Description: This technique coats the users mouth throat and lungs with a light film of water, enhancing the lungs ability to take in and recycle oxygen much like the underwater breathing technique, while also speeding up the water aerobic respiration process of the mitochondria allowing it to be pushed longer than normal and with better efficiency without suffering an oxygen tax of the individuals muscles. This technique grants a tier minor advantage to coordination and a tier to reflex's to represent the effects of maintaining Aerobic cellular respiration while in combat and how it allows the individual to push their muscles for longer and faster without suffering the build up of lactic acid.

(In real life this would increase the individuals stamina by a near limitless amount, as well as allow the user to push their body to the limits essentially all the time, and allow the body to keep up high stress exercise nearly endlessly (until your tendons snapped and your bones broke), but the site nix's stamina buffs, so given this is a cardio based not strength based it would be closer to reflex's and coordination rather than strength and constitution)

Drawbacks: With this longer term explanation there wouldn't be a real life negative side effect that wouldn't be traced back to the space magic side of things, as the person wouldn't be burning more fat than usual just more efficiently then before and the amount of energy produced would be much higher, so I think the best negative is the one from first step to mastery.

even after sixth step to mastery is over the body will still try to emulate its new rate of cellular respiration. In short this means that the user will feel tired and sluggish suffering a major advantage loss to reflex's and coordination the post after this technique ends, unless the upkeep for this ability is paid for for an additional post, so that the body can cool down.


As for the second technique It was more about homeostasis, which is a part of what the cardiovascular system does with a secondary focus on increasing blood flow and red blood cell production by increasing the bone marrow in ones blood, which would have the side effect of increasing someone's durability read constitution. That being said i completely rewrote the technique into something more direct.

It isn't in bold because all of it is new.

Name: The Seventh step to Mastery: Water Style muscle coolant
Rank: S
Cost: 15 intial, 15 upkeep
Range: 0/self
Type: Ijutsu taijutsu ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive, Defensive
Elemental Affinity: water
Notation: (Hiden, Secret Technique, Kinjutsu, Kekkei Genkai, etc.)
Handsigns: rooster dog monkey serpent
Lore/Flavor: Contrary to the title this technique actually performs three different processes and stages that activate in sequential order.

The first stage: It uses chakra to rapidly reinforce and repair the users bones and tendons allowing them to take more pressure from from both internal and external stresses without breaking or snapping.

The Second stage uses chakra to regulate nerve impulses, allowing the user to access more muscle fiber than should normally be available, granting them increased strength.

The third stage: uses water chakra to regulate homeostatic environment of the body, allowing the body to push its muscle fibers harder and take more abuse without burning up due to the increased muscle use. Someone in the third stage's body would appear pinker than usual and warm to the touch as the excess heat leaves their body.

Description:
The first stage of this technique simply reinforces the nerves and bones in the users body, granting the user a tier minor advantage to constitution.

The second stage of this technique grants the user greater control of their muscle fibers outside of that which is safe for a normal human body, granting an additional tier to strength.

The third stage reinforces the other two stages, by regulating the heat build up in the body, enhancing the user's strength and constitution by an additional minor advantage, due to the increased efficiency.

Drawback. This technique has one major drawback. Each stage is activated sequentially as the technique goes on and any interruption to this progress starts it entirely over again. Someone that can disrupt techniques could easily force the user to pay an A rank cost for a B rank booster over and over again. Similarly if the user stops using the technique for some reason then it also starts all over again. More importantly if the technique is stopped during stage two, the user receives a major disadvantage to strength and constitution until healed, due to muscle damage, due to muscle fibers burning up.
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Wisdom: Proficient

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