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 Post subject: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2017 12:00 pm 
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[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b] (E-S)
[b]Range:[/b] (meters)
[i]Type:[/i] (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Taijutsu, Shurikenjutsu, Kenjutsu, Kugutsu, Kinjutsu)
[i]Sub-type:[/i] (Supplementary, Summoning, Offensive, Defensive)
[b]Elemental Affinity:[/b]  (If None list N/A)
[b]Notation:[/b]  (Clan, Bloodline, Secret Technique?)
[b]Handsigns:[/b] (What hand signs, if it requires none, drawbacks must include a charge time)
[b]Lore/Flavor:[/b] (Describe the lore/flavor here. Anything about *why* your technique works the way it does, then place the actual mechanics down in Description)
[b]Description:[/b] (Describe the casting process. Not all Ninjutsu require handseals if its basic chakra manipulation.  Jutsu can involve weapons, specific items, etc. Also describe what it looks like, and what it does)
[b]Drawbacks:[/b] (List all drawbacks)

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2017 1:56 am 
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Name: Head-Splitting Spin
Rank: C
Range: Sword length
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Fully utilizing the non-effectiveness of physical attacks against Hozuki this technique was devised to catch opponents off-guard with an otherwise impossible move.
Description: Fairly simple in concept this technique consists of two motions; a forward lunge towards the target accompanied with a vertical slice arcing upwards followed up with a diagonal spinning slash. The first motion is designed to be parried by the target, not putting much effort into the swing other than the user’s base states with Kenjutsu bonuses. The second slash moves much quicker, swinging the blade back through its original arc and through the user’s torso for a downward arcing diagonal motion. Twirling the blade while within the Hozuki’s body to allow the user to use the sharpened edge on the target. The second move receives a C-Rank boost with an equal cost associated.
Drawbacks: Requires Hozuki clan watery bod’ to, ya know, slip the ol’ blade through the user’s torso.

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2017 2:00 am 
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I'll allow it.

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Ninjutsu Expert
Kyujutsu Master
Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 1:18 pm 
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Name: Water Rope Slash
Rank: C
Range: 2-4 meters
Type: Kenjutsu | Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Village open
Handsigns: Dragon -> Horse
Lore/Flavor: Finding a need to get around his lack of strength Mizui developed this technique to compensate to utilize a relatively weak but precise Suiton chakra flow manipulation to impede his target’s movements.
Description: Forming the following seals the user flows Suiton chakra through their sword and can release a watery rope designed to restrain target’s limbs. The rope moves at a speed matched to the user’s Dexterity and is able to be fueled with a C or B-Rank amount of chakra in terms of potency with D and C-Rank upkeep costs respectfully. The size of the rope is dependent on the amount of chakra put in too, C-Rank reaching two meters and B-Rank reaching four.
Drawbacks: The watery bind can be easily broken with an equally potent Ninjutsu technique or chakra flow. Raw Strength can also be used to release from the ropes grasp, using the following model;
Average breaks C-Rank
Proficient breaks B-Rank
Masterful breaks A-Rank

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

Character Sheet
Chemistry Shop
Customs
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 2:16 pm 
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How does this interact with the Strength stat?

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Stats:
Str: Epic
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary
Coo: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Ref: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

Skills:
Taijutsu Paragon
Fuuinjutsu Spec
Ninjutsu Expert
Ijutsu Adept
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 2:24 pm 
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Hmm, that's a good point. I wasn't sure how to line up the Strength stat with chakra ranks as we have one more stat now then with the ranks. What would you say to lining up E-S with Poor-Legendary Strength with Godlike excluded?

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 2:26 pm 
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Sounds good to me

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Stats:
Str: Epic
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary
Coo: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Ref: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

Skills:
Taijutsu Paragon
Fuuinjutsu Spec
Ninjutsu Expert
Ijutsu Adept
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 2:33 pm 
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Righteous, got er added in.

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 2:35 pm 
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Name: Water Rope Slash
Rank: C
Range: 2-4 meters
Type: Kenjutsu | Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Village open
Handsigns: Dragon -> Horse
Lore/Flavor: Finding a need to get around his lack of strength Mizui developed this technique to compensate to utilize a relatively weak but precise Suiton chakra flow manipulation to impede his target’s movements.
Description: Forming the following seals the user flows Suiton chakra through their sword and can release a watery rope designed to restrain target’s limbs. The rope moves at a speed matched to the user’s Dexterity and is able to be fueled with a C or B-Rank amount of chakra in terms of potency with D and C-Rank upkeep costs respectfully. The size of the rope is dependent on the amount of chakra put in too, C-Rank reaching two meters and B-Rank reaching four.
Drawbacks: The watery bind can be easily broken with an equally potent Ninjutsu technique or chakra flow. Raw Strength can also be used to release from the ropes grasp, using the following model;
Average breaks C-Rank
Proficient breaks B-Rank
Masterful breaks A-Rank
Approved

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Stats:
Str: Epic
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary
Coo: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Ref: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

Skills:
Taijutsu Paragon
Fuuinjutsu Spec
Ninjutsu Expert
Ijutsu Adept
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Thu Oct 12, 2017 2:12 pm 
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Name: Seppuku Fake Out
Rank: C
Range: Sword length
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Fully utilizing the non-effectiveness of physical attacks against Hozuki this technique was devised to catch opponents off guard with overwise impossible moves.
Description: Starting with a horizontoal slash the user continues with their momentum until their back is facing the enemy, quickly flipping their sword around and stabbing the blade through the user’s chest to stab them with an unorthodox move to try and catch them off guard. A C-Rank boost is given to Dexterity for both motions with an equal cost.
Drawbacks: Requires Hozuki clan watery bod’ to, ya know, slip the ol’ blade through the user’s torso.

Name: Tentacle Sword Wrap
Rank: B
Range: 2 meters
Type: Kenjutsu | Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: Dragon -> Horse -> Tiger -> Hare
Lore/Flavor: Finding a need to get around his lack of strength Mizui developed this technique to compensate to utilize a weak but precise Suiton chakra flow manipulation.
Description: Forming the following seals the user flows Suiton chakra through their sword, materializing into a watery tentacle that remains wrapped around the user’s blade. The extra appendage can be fueled with C-A rank chakra, with a rank lower upkeep cost to maintain its form and function. Remaining fixed to the sword’s blade the tentacle is designed for close-combat, particularly when clashing with an opponent using Kenjutsu, Bukijutsu or Taijutsu to defend against the user’s sword. The tentacle moves at the same speed as the user’s Dexterity, able to extend out two meters to restrain a single weapon and limb with its grip. Immediately upon attachment the user is then free to move their blade freely and strike their target while momentarily bound.
Drawbacks: The watery tentacle can be broken with an equally potent Ninjutsu technique or chakra flow. Raw Strength can also be used to release from the ropes grasp, using the following model;
Average breaks C-Rank
Proficient breaks B-Rank
Masterful breaks A-Rank

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Sun Oct 15, 2017 12:46 am 
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Name: Seppuku Fake Out
Rank: C
Range: Sword length
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Fully utilizing the non-effectiveness of physical attacks against Hozuki this technique was devised to catch opponents off guard with overwise impossible moves.
Description: Starting with a horizontoal slash the user continues with their momentum until their back is facing the enemy, quickly flipping their sword around and stabbing the blade through the user’s chest to stab them with an unorthodox move to try and catch them off guard. A C-Rank boost is given to Dexterity for both motions with an equal cost.
Drawbacks: Requires Hozuki clan watery bod’ to, ya know, slip the ol’ blade through the user’s torso.

Don't just list "C rank boost." Actually write it out. It would be a tier since you're only boosting to once stat.

Name: Tentacle Sword Wrap
Rank: B
Range: 2 meters
Type: Kenjutsu | Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: Dragon -> Horse -> Tiger -> Hare
Lore/Flavor: Finding a need to get around his lack of strength Mizui developed this technique to compensate to utilize a weak but precise Suiton chakra flow manipulation.
Description: Forming the following seals the user flows Suiton chakra through their sword, materializing into a watery tentacle that remains wrapped around the user’s blade. The extra appendage can be fueled with C-A rank chakra, with a rank lower upkeep cost to maintain its form and function. Remaining fixed to the sword’s blade the tentacle is designed for close-combat, particularly when clashing with an opponent using Kenjutsu, Bukijutsu or Taijutsu to defend against the user’s sword. The tentacle moves at the same speed as the user’s Dexterity, able to extend out two meters to restrain a single weapon and limb with its grip. Immediately upon attachment the user is then free to move their blade freely and strike their target while momentarily bound.
Drawbacks: The watery tentacle can be broken with an equally potent Ninjutsu technique or chakra flow. Raw Strength can also be used to release from the ropes grasp, using the following model;
Average breaks C-Rank
Proficient breaks B-Rank
Masterful breaks A-Rank

Seems fine.

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Strength: Average
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Proficient
Agility: Proficient
Dexterity: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Elements: Fire/Scorch
FS: Taijutsu Minor/Kuchiyose Minor/Ninjutsu Minor/Sensory Minor


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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Sun Oct 15, 2017 7:21 pm 
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Right on, I'll tidy up the first custom as well that has a similar C-Rank boost for consistency.

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Name: Head-Splitting Spin
Rank: C
Range: Sword length
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Fully utilizing the non-effectiveness of physical attacks against Hozuki this technique was devised to catch opponents off-guard with an otherwise impossible move.
Description: Fairly simple in concept this technique consists of two motions; a forward lunge towards the target accompanied with a vertical slice arcing upwards followed up with a diagonal spinning slash. The first motion is designed to be parried by the target, not putting much effort into the swing other than the user’s base states with Kenjutsu bonuses. The second slash moves much quicker, swinging the blade back through its original arc and through the user’s torso for a downward arcing diagonal motion. Twirling the blade while within the Hozuki’s body to allow the user to use the sharpened edge on the target. The second move receives a C-Rank boost with an equal cost associated. This raises the user's Dexterity by 2 Advantages, dropping to a single advantage at Masterful and having no effect on Epic and above.
Drawbacks: Requires Hozuki clan watery bod’ to, ya know, slip the ol’ blade through the user’s torso.

Name: Seppuku Fake Out
Rank: C
Range: Sword length
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Fully utilizing the non-effectiveness of physical attacks against Hozuki this technique was devised to catch opponents off guard with overwise impossible moves.
Description: Starting with a horizontoal slash the user continues with their momentum until their back is facing the enemy, quickly flipping their sword around and stabbing the blade through the user’s chest to stab them with an unorthodox move to try and catch them off guard. A C-Rank boost is given to Dexterity for both motions with an equal cost. This raises the user's Dexterity by 2 Advantages, dropping to a single advantage at Masterful and having no effect on Epic and above.
Drawbacks: Requires Hozuki clan watery bod’ to, ya know, slip the ol’ blade through the user’s torso.

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

Character Sheet
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2017 6:16 pm 
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Back to the drawing board with this one :3

Ignore this fella
Name: Propelling Squid Blade
Rank: B
Range: 10m-30m / 20m-40m
Type: Kenjutsu | Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive | Charka Flow
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: Monkey > Rat > Tiger > Dragon > Horse > Dragon > Ram
Parent Tech: Water Release: Snake’s Mouth
Lore/Flavor: After realizing that Mizui could more easily move alongside a Suiton creation such as Snake’s Mouth using his Hozuki properties he devised this technique to extend through his blade rather than a singular Ninjutsu release.
Description: After forming the above hand seals Mizui channels the molded Suiton chakra through his blade, releasing in the form of a watery squid. Designed to be used with Suiteki, his special katana that increased Suiton Chakra by 1 rank, Mizui can create far larger creations with minimal chakra expenditure (though this technique does not require the use of Suiteki but is optimised for its use). Ranging from C-A chakra usage the technique’s potential potency using Suiteki is B-S, increasing the size of the creation considerably as noted in the technique’s range. C-Rank is 10 meters, B-Rank is 20 meters, A-Rank is 30 meters and S-Rank is 40 meters. These are the rough estimates for the squid’s size, always oriented with its pointed head extending outward from the blade and the tentacles remaining near the hilt. Four of the six tentacles are merely 1/4 the size of the squid while the two longest appendages are half the size. The smaller tentacles are wrapped around the user’s arm while the longer two remain ready to latch onto physical objects, able to wrap around passing trees or other obstacles to allow for additional mobility. Think of them as simple ropes that can latch onto objects in order to utilize built up momentum in acrobatic maneuvers rather than extra limbs.
The user is able to move through the squid's body with Hozuki enhanced speed, though they are limited in how large the creation is. Control over the squid is bound to the user’s Dexterity, meaning that if the user’s Dexterity is greater than or equal to their enhanced Agility the squid can be moved alongside the user without needing to catch up to them. If the user’s Dexterity is below their Agility then the maximum distance that can be traveled per post is that of the squid’s size.
To maintain this technique beyond its initial creation the user must pay a rank lower than that put into it each post.
Drawbacks: Requires the user to be Hozuki for the enhanced speed in water that it is inherently built around.

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

Character Sheet
Chemistry Shop
Customs
Image


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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Fri Oct 27, 2017 11:56 am 
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Gonna just avoid Boruto things for now :3 I'll throw these guys on the back burner
Name: Lightning Fish
Rank: A
Range: 20 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Raiton
Notation: Kiba Exclusive
Handsigns: Ram
Lore/Flavor:
Description: Designed to be used when fighting around water, specifically with the user walking over the water’s surface, a large three meter porpoise-like creation manifests out of the user’s chakra. The creation is able to last three posts and operates independent of the user’s own line of sight or concentration, simply seeking a moment to strike at the enemy be them above water or in it. Costs an A-Rank amount of chakra.
Drawbacks: While being a technique used with Kiba it can easily be copied with the use of a Sharingan.

Name: Thunderswords Technique: Remote Control
Rank: A
Range: 20 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Raiton
Notation: Kiba Exclusive
Handsigns: Ox → Dragon → Monkey → Ram
Lore/Flavor:
Description: Both swords are able to be remotely controlled once the hand seals are formed, freeing the user’s hands. They are able to spin around and are controlled with the same Dexterity as the user’s with Kenjutsu bonuses applied. Costs an A-Rank amount of chakra to activate and a C-Rank per post to maintain. The swords can only have the techniques used through them while levitating if they are within a single meter of the user, still requiring the use of hand seals but granting the user the rank increase and lowered cost afforded to those with the Raiton element. Alongside Kiba’s techniques being able to be used with the Twinswords other techniques such as Raiton Chakra Flow are able to be transferred when the blade’s are within a single meter of the user, though these techniques do not receives a decrease in cost and only get the rank increase if the user has Raiton.
Drawbacks: Requires Kenjutsu Specialist for the highly irregular form of Kenjutsu. This technique is also only possible if the user possess Raiton themselves, as the levitation is really just Raiton being channeled lightly from the user to the blades. This also means that the levitation can be negated easily with Futon chakra, requiring just a C-Rank or higher Futon tech to disrupt. The user is unable to use Kiba’s other techniques remotely (or any chakra technique for that matter), only able to use them with hand seals at their own location within one meter. When using Kiba’s techniques with hand seals with the blades away from them they do not receive a rank increase in rank or decrease in cost for those with Raiton.
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Name: Water Release: Water Forge Technique
Rank: B
Range: 2 meters
Type: Ninjutsu | Kenjutsu | Chakra Flow
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor:
Description: A simple Suiton chakra flow technique that is designed for a quick deflection of physical force, manifesting in a swirling surge of Suiton chakra around the user's blade that can then be shot out at the target to blast them away. Costs a B-Rank amount of chakra and can fire out two meters from the user's blade, typically performed with a thrust for maximum distance.
Drawbacks: Can be countered with an equal level chakra flow / Ninjutsu technique.

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
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Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
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Ninjutsu - Expert
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:03 pm 
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Name: Propelling Squid Blade
Rank: B
Range: 10m-30m / 20m-40m
Type: Kenjutsu | Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Offensive | Chakra Flow
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Kirigakure open, Clan
Handsigns: Monkey > Rat > Tiger > Dragon > Horse > Dragon > Ram
Parent Tech: Water Release: Snake’s Mouth
Lore/Flavor: After realizing that Mizui could more easily move alongside a Suiton creation such as Snake’s Mouth using his Hozuki properties he devised this technique to extend through his blade rather than a singular Ninjutsu release.
Description: After forming the above hand seals Mizui channels the molded Suiton chakra through his blade, releasing in the form of a watery squid. Designed to be used with Suiteki, Mizui’s special katana that increases Suiton Chakra by one rank, Mizui can create far larger creations with minimal chakra expenditure (though this technique does not require the use of Suiteki but is optimised for its use). Ranging from C-A chakra usage the technique’s potential potency using Suiteki is B-S, increasing the size of the creation considerably as noted in the technique’s range. C-Rank is 5 meters, B-Rank is 10 meters, A-Rank is 20 meters and S-Rank is 30 meters. These are the rough estimates for the squid’s size, always oriented with its pointed head extending outward from the blade and the tentacles remaining near the hilt. Four of the six tentacles are merely 1/4 the size of the squid while the two longest appendages are 1/2 the size. The smaller tentacles are wrapped around the user’s arm while the longer two remain ready to latch onto physical objects, able to wrap around passing trees or other obstacles to allow for additional mobility. Think of them as simple ropes that can latch onto objects in order to utilize built up momentum in acrobatic maneuvers rather than extra limbs. The squid is moved with the user’s Dexterity and can be moved in peculiar contorting ways such as the user running through the creation and turning it ‘inside out’ without having to release it.
The user is able to move through the squid's body with enhanced Agility thanks to their Hozuki body (which is a major advantage), though they are entirely limited in how large the creation is. If the user’s Dexterity is equal to their Agility them the squid is able to be moved at such speed that it is able to keep up with the user to keep them perpetually covered in water. There is a limit with higher speeds of Agility that require larger squid creations to keep the squid up properly, even if they have the same Agility and Dexterity. 30 meter squids can support continuous movement at Legendary Agility, 20 meters supports Epic Agility, 10 meters supports Masterful Agility and 5 meters supports Proficient Agility.
To maintain this technique beyond its initial creation the user must pay a rank lower than the chakra put into it each post, unless it is D-Rank then it is also D-Rank instead of being free.
Drawbacks: Requires the user to be Hozuki for the enhanced speed in water that it is inherently built around. The squid had minimal offensive capability, designed as more of a mobile pool of water for Mizui to speed up through. This makes it count as one rank lower for the purpose of damage/potency when striking a target, though it does not mean techniques of lower potency can dispel it. The technique releases if the user loses grip over the used sword or leaves the confines of the squid with the blade completely exited.

Name: Water Spout Release
Rank: B
Range: 10-40 meters
Type: Kenjutsu | Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Secret Technique / Village Open
Handsigns: Horse -> Dog -> Rabbit -> Snake
Lore/Flavor: Mizui came up with this technique to create a large pool of water with which to work with being such a Suiton focused shinobi.
Description: After forming the hand seals the user raises their sword and releases a torrent of water into the air that covers the immediate area in a pool of water. Requiring at least a B-Rank amount of chakra the user can put in however much extra chakra they desire to make larger and larger pools to work with. B-Rank creates 10 cubic meters of water, A-Rank creates 20 cubic meters and S-Rank creates 30 cubic meters.
Drawbacks: Requires the user to remain still for an entire post to get all the water out.

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Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
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Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
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Age: 17

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:59 pm 
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First one is chill. It's just like a mobile water fortress thing for you, yeah?

Second one, if it costs a B-Rank amount of chakra minimum, would you mind just making it a B-Rank?

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Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Sun Nov 05, 2017 5:00 pm 
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Ya, that's what I was going for with the first guy.

Righteous, got er edited up.

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Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
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Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Sun Nov 05, 2017 5:15 pm 
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Seems solid

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Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2018 5:17 pm 
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Name: Acid Whirlpool | Murasaki Uzu (紫渦)
Rank: B
Range: 20 meters
Type: Nin-Ken-Ijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Secret Technique
Parent Technique: Poison Mist + Chakra Flow
Handsigns: Horse -> Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After creating a flesh-eating acid Mizui expanded it through the application of using chakra to create poison and form a swirling wave of skin dissolving acid.
Description: Unfortunately Mizui has been unable to find the method of perfectly reproducing the Lick of the Devil’s effects through chakra alone and without having a specimen to use as the techniques catalyst. By coating the user’s blade with a dose of Lick of the Devil a B-Rank Suiton chakra flow is needed to initiate the technique, immediately followed by the two required hand seals. As the hand seals are formed the user whips around in a circle, upon their completion a whirlpool of Suiton expands around Mizui for 20 meters. This consumes the source of Lick of the Devil and the created acid water retains its properties for five posts. If stricken with Raiton chakra of equal or higher value this water will evaporate into a poison mist that applies the same dissolving effects when inhaled to the throat and lungs. This mist will also last for however longer the acid water would have.
Drawbacks: Requires a dosage of Lick of Devil per use.

Name: Blood Vessel Rupture | Kekkanharetsu (血管破裂)
Rank: A-Rank
Range: 1-3 M
Type: Ken-Ijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Secret Technique
Parent Technique: Chakra Flow + Chakra Scalpel
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Looking to combine his skill in Kenjutsu and Ijutsu Mizui developed this technique to allow for highly precise strikes in order to more quickly wear down his opponents through the singular aim of severing blood vessels. This technique is also designed as an easier means to getting poisons of his own creation more directly into the bloodstream of his target.
Description: Starting with the simple application of Suiton chakra flow in the user’s sword this chakra is then refined into a similar state to that of the chakra scalpel. While the chakra scalpel is able to cut through a great deal of organic matter this particular manifestation is designed with a singular purpose in mind; the severing of blood vessels. The chakra emits a roughly seven centimeter aura, costing a B-Rank amount of chakra to initiate and a C-Rank amount of chakra per post for upkeep.
Through the properties of Suition the chakra flow is able to be flicked off with a close to mid-range striking distance. The range increases with higher levels of Dexterity as noted below, with each advantage adding an extra thirty centimeters.
Masterful: 1 meter
Epic: 2 meters
Legendary<: 3 meters
Drawbacks: Requires the user to reach a minimum of Masterful Dexterity to perform, this cannot be obtained through the expenditure of stamina as it will break the user’s focus. The only acceptable boosts are those that cost nothing, such as raises from a FS. User must be at least a Major in both Kenjutsu and Ijutsu. Chakra flow techniques and Ninjutsu of equal or higher potency may dispel the technique sans Katon techniques which require to be one rank higher. While the purpose of this technique is to sever any blood vessels it comes into contact with it is unable to pass through bones and cut beyond it, only through muscle and skin tissue.

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Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2018 10:30 am 
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Hello! Let's get right into it c:

Acid Whirlpool | Murasaki Uzu (紫渦)

Reduce the range by 5 meters and add a note in the drawbacks that the handseals are a must, no matter what, no handseal reductions.

Blood Vessel Rupture | Kekkanharetsu (血管破裂)

Should add a chakra cost to 'flicking' or extending the suiton chakra.

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2018 1:26 pm 
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You da bomb. Put the edits in green below.

Name: Acid Whirlpool | Murasaki Uzu (紫渦)
Rank: B
Range: 15 meters
Type: Nin-Ken-Ijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Secret Technique
Parent Technique: Poison Mist + Chakra Flow
Handsigns: Horse -> Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After creating a flesh-eating acid Mizui expanded it through the application of using chakra to create poison and form a swirling wave of skin dissolving acid.
Description: Unfortunately Mizui has been unable to find the method of perfectly reproducing the Lick of the Devil’s effects through chakra alone and without having a specimen to use as the techniques catalyst. By coating the user’s blade with a dose of Lick of the Devil a B-Rank Suiton chakra flow is needed to initiate the technique, immediately followed by the two required hand seals. As the hand seals are formed the user whips around in a circle, upon their completion a whirlpool of Suiton expands around Mizui for 20 meters. This consumes the source of Lick of the Devil and the created acid water retains its properties for five posts. If stricken with Raiton chakra of equal or higher value this water will evaporate into a poison mist that applies the same dissolving effects when inhaled to the throat and lungs. This mist will also last for however long the acid water would have.
Drawbacks: Requires a dosage of Lick of Devil per use. Both hand seals are required and receive no discount from the Ninjutsu FS.

Name: Blood Vessel Rupture | Kekkanharetsu (血管破裂)
Rank: A-Rank
Range: 1-3 M
Type: Ken-Ijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Secret Technique
Parent Technique: Chakra Flow + Chakra Scalpel
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Looking to combine his skill in Kenjutsu and Ijutsu Mizui developed this technique to allow for highly precise strikes in order to more quickly wear down his opponents through the singular aim of severing blood vessels. This technique is also designed as an easier means to getting poisons of his own creation more directly into the bloodstream of his target.
Description: Starting with the simple application of Suiton chakra flow in the user’s sword this chakra is then refined into a similar state to that of the chakra scalpel. While the chakra scalpel is able to cut through a great deal of organic matter this particular manifestation is designed with a singular purpose in mind; the severing of blood vessels. The chakra emits a roughly seven centimeter aura, costing a B-Rank amount of chakra to initiate and a C-Rank amount of chakra per post for upkeep.
Through the properties of Suition and with an additional C-Rank cost, the chakra flow is able to be flicked off with a close to mid-range striking distance. The range increases with higher levels of Dexterity as noted below, with each advantage adding an extra thirty centimeters.
Masterful: 1 meter
Epic: 2 meters
Legendary<: 3 meters
Drawbacks: Requires the user to reach a minimum of Masterful Dexterity to perform, this cannot be obtained through the expenditure of stamina as it will break the user’s focus. The only acceptable boosts are those that cost nothing, such as raises from a FS. User must be at least a Major in both Kenjutsu and Ijutsu. Chakra flow techniques and Ninjutsu of equal or higher potency may dispel the technique sans Katon techniques which require to be one rank higher. While the purpose of this technique is to sever any blood vessels it comes into contact with it is unable to pass through bones and cut beyond it, only through muscle and skin tissue.

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Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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You da bomb. Put the edits in green below.

Name: Acid Whirlpool | Murasaki Uzu (紫渦)
Rank: B
Range: 15 meters
Type: Nin-Ken-Ijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Secret Technique
Parent Technique: Poison Mist + Chakra Flow
Handsigns: Horse -> Dragon
Lore/Flavor: After creating a flesh-eating acid Mizui expanded it through the application of using chakra to create poison and form a swirling wave of skin dissolving acid.
Description: Unfortunately Mizui has been unable to find the method of perfectly reproducing the Lick of the Devil’s effects through chakra alone and without having a specimen to use as the techniques catalyst. By coating the user’s blade with a dose of Lick of the Devil a B-Rank Suiton chakra flow is needed to initiate the technique, immediately followed by the two required hand seals. As the hand seals are formed the user whips around in a circle, upon their completion a whirlpool of Suiton expands around Mizui for 20 meters. This consumes the source of Lick of the Devil and the created acid water retains its properties for five posts. If stricken with Raiton chakra of equal or higher value this water will evaporate into a poison mist that applies the same dissolving effects when inhaled to the throat and lungs. This mist will also last for however long the acid water would have.
Drawbacks: Requires a dosage of Lick of Devil per use. Both hand seals are required and receive no discount from the Ninjutsu FS.

Name: Blood Vessel Rupture | Kekkanharetsu (血管破裂)
Rank: A-Rank
Range: 1-3 M
Type: Ken-Ijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive
Elemental Affinity: Suiton
Notation: Secret Technique
Parent Technique: Chakra Flow + Chakra Scalpel
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Looking to combine his skill in Kenjutsu and Ijutsu Mizui developed this technique to allow for highly precise strikes in order to more quickly wear down his opponents through the singular aim of severing blood vessels. This technique is also designed as an easier means to getting poisons of his own creation more directly into the bloodstream of his target.
Description: Starting with the simple application of Suiton chakra flow in the user’s sword this chakra is then refined into a similar state to that of the chakra scalpel. While the chakra scalpel is able to cut through a great deal of organic matter this particular manifestation is designed with a singular purpose in mind; the severing of blood vessels. The chakra emits a roughly seven centimeter aura, costing a B-Rank amount of chakra to initiate and a C-Rank amount of chakra per post for upkeep.
Through the properties of Suition and with an additional C-Rank cost, the chakra flow is able to be flicked off with a close to mid-range striking distance. The range increases with higher levels of Dexterity as noted below, with each advantage adding an extra thirty centimeters.
Masterful: 1 meter
Epic: 2 meters
Legendary<: 3 meters
Drawbacks: Requires the user to reach a minimum of Masterful Dexterity to perform, this cannot be obtained through the expenditure of stamina as it will break the user’s focus. The only acceptable boosts are those that cost nothing, such as raises from a FS. User must be at least a Major in both Kenjutsu and Ijutsu. Chakra flow techniques and Ninjutsu of equal or higher potency may dispel the technique sans Katon techniques which require to be one rank higher. While the purpose of this technique is to sever any blood vessels it comes into contact with it is unable to pass through bones and cut beyond it, only through muscle and skin tissue.
Good stuff, approved!

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Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

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Elements:
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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:19 pm 
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Name: Chakra-Enhanced Strength: Kenjutsu Style
Rank: B
Range: Sword length
Type: Kenjutsu-Ijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive | Chakra Flow
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Knowing physical strength to be his most lacking area, Mizui developed this technique to help compensate there and be able to compete more easily with stronger opponents.
Description: A technique that utilizes highly refined chakra control and concentration, where the user builds up chakra through their sword and releases it with pinpoint timing upon impact. This can be used to bust through thick armor, deflect opponents weapons with greater force to allow for follow up strikes more easily or simply cleaving an unarmed enemy to greater effect.
Costing a B-Rank amount of chakra per hit the user’s Strength is increased by a full tier. Cannot be stacked with other styles for additional Strength boosts. Receives cost reduction from Ijutsu as well as chakra flow cost reduction from Kenjutsu.
Drawbacks: Is costly with each strike requiring a B-Rank amount of chakra.

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Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:53 pm 
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There's no actual drawback to this tech. You're spending 1/4th of a C-Rank with each blow from cost reductions. This is basically just a free tier of Strength at the moment. I'd like to see some real drawbacks or tone down the cost reductions, one or the other y'know?

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Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

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 Post subject: Re: Mizui's Custom Jutsu
PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2018 10:29 pm 
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I feel you, my dude. Got that shit reigned in.

Name: Chakra-Enhanced Strength: Kenjutsu Style
Rank: B
Range: Sword length
Type: Kenjutsu-Ijutsu
Sub-type: Offensive | Chakra Flow
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Secret Technique
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: Knowing physical strength to be his most lacking area, Mizui developed this technique to help compensate there and be able to compete more easily with stronger opponents.
Description: A technique that utilizes highly refined chakra control and concentration, where the user builds up chakra through their sword and releases it with pinpoint timing upon impact. This can be used to bust through thick armor, deflect opponents weapons with greater force to allow for follow up strikes more easily or simply cleaving an unarmed enemy to greater effect.
Costing a B-Rank amount of chakra per hit the user’s Strength is increased by a full tier. Cannot be stacked with other styles for additional Strength boosts. Receives cost reduction from Ijutsu though losses all reduction from Kenjutsu.
Drawbacks: The enhanced strikes are unable to have any element infused in with them, also requiring the user to be at least a Major with both Kenjutsu and Ijutsu for the concentration involved.

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Stats n' Stuff:
Strength: Proficient (+1 Kenjutsu)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Epic
Reflexes: Epic (Legendary Kenjutsu)
Coordination: Masterful (Epic Kenjutsu)
Wisdom: Proficient

Major:
Kenjutsu - Specialist
Fuuinjutsu - Expert

Minor:
Ijutsu - Expert
Ninjutsu - Expert
Sensory - Expert

Crafting:
Chemistry - Master

Might: 2
Will: 2
Fate: 0

Age: 17

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