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 Post subject: Shirou-Akechi (WIP)
PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2018 4:37 am 
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Shirou Akechi

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Personal Information

Name: Shirou Akechi

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Height: 6’1”

Weight: 185 lbs.

Rank: Jōnin

Faction of Origin: Shinobi

Village: Konohagakure

Bloodline/Clan: Sun (Taiton) Release - Akechi Clan {200 Cp}

Personality Traits:

  • Brutally Honest: Shirou is honest even if it hurts his or someone else’s feelings.
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  • Honorable: Shirou always strive to do what he thinks is right and never break a promise.
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  • Easygoing: Shirou is rarly serious unless he or someone he cares about is in danger.

Face Claim: Vergil - DMC

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Theme Song: Fairy Tail Theme
https://youtu.be/kIwmrk7LoDk

Chakra Color: Gold-lined Silver

Nindo/Bushido:

“My blade is my own will given form,

It is not an object but an extension of myself,

It is both my shield and my sword,

It is no mere weapon or simple tool,

It is but a symbol of the path I walk.”


Character Preferences:

  • Likes: Quality swords, Honorable duels of skill, Foreign delicacy “Tacos”, Sunlight
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  • Dislikes: Cowards, Harming innocent people, Rude behavior, Night
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  • Goals: Perfect his swordsmanship, Craft his own legendary katana, own his own taco restaurant
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  • Admires: Samurai, strong opponents, quality workmanship
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  • Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual Male, Attracted to strong yet kind women.

History

Shirou was orphaned as a child and adopted by a secluded sect of ninja who practiced an ancient doctrine of the lost dragons; “The Lost Order Of The Sun Dragon”. Shirou was raised by an old blind ninja, Kenshin, that trained him in the ways of the dragon. He was trained in the art of ninjutsu, kenjutsu, taijutsu, ijutsu and sword crafting. These skills enabled Shirou to be able to defeat his enemies, protect himself, help others, and be able to maintain his weapons. Shirou became the best student the order had ever trained, and had mastered all of the skills and lessons that he had been taught.

Although Shirou became one of the strongest shinobi in the sect, he did not let that new found strength take control of him. Instead, he used his strength to empower those around him, improving their abilities and making up for their own weaknesses via cooperation. After years of training, practice, and teaching, Shirou became accepted by almost everyone in the order, even though he was an outsider by blood.

Around age 20, Shirou was given a test. The test was a selection for the next heir of the dragon, leader of the order. Shirou past the test and became next Dragon Heir. He was the youngest and the only non native born to ever do so. The test had marked Shirou with the Seal of the Dragon and merged part of his soul with that of the ancient sun dragon, Shen-Long. However, a few other students had became disgruntled with the fact their next heir was a non native, believing that Shirou had cheated and stolen the dragon’s power.

Shirou soon after set out on a quick meditative journey to discover his place and path as the next heir. While he was away the disgruntled students released an ancient giant monster sealed away by the founders of the order. When Shirou returned he only saw the broken remains of the order scattered across the ruins of his home. Rage filled his heart and when he saw the monster he blacked out. The next thing his remembers is the monster dead at his feet, appearing as if it was torn apart.

A week later, Shirou had awoken as the last remnants of the order were starting to rebuild; after honoring and burying their dead. Shirou tried to help however the people ran in fear. They all had seen the monster Shirou had become, in a blind range he had used a forbidden jutsu that not only slaughtered the monster but also his mentor,Kenshin. The last of the Order then exiled him in fear of his power but not before stripping him of his title, rank, and his status as heir of the dragon.

Shirou then grabbed the last of his possession and left the only home he ever known. As the order is located in a secret realm, the land of dragons, Shirou past the dragon’s gate and through a cavernous passage to the outskirts of the land of Iron. As Shirou exited the passage it sealed behind him, leaving him to wonder into a new world with no way to seemingly return.

Shirou wondered this new world for a time till he eventually drifted towards Konohagakure. There he discovered an injured ninja and helped him recover. The ninja invited him back to the village as thanks and Shirou agreed. As they returned to the village Shirou explained his back story, but the injured ninja just thought he was crazy. As they approached to village however, they came under attack by an enemy. Shirou asked if the opposing ninja had injured the other one. The enemy snickered in acceptance and leap down to attack. Angered by his enemy actions, Shirou showed him no mercy, and cut him down before he even reached the ground.

The ninja was impressed and started to believe some of Shirou’s story. When they finally returned to the village they were welcomed in and treated for their injuries. The ninja Shirou had meet had told his superiors about Shirou back story and skills. The village then offered Shirou, a home and a probationary job as a Jōnin based on his abilities. Shirou jumped at to chance, and worked hard to earn his keep in the village.

Restricted Loan Technique

“Raiden” [Sword of the Thunder God]: Shortly after being exiled from his home, Shirou found a broken relic in an old, rundown pawn shop. Shirou noticed it’s hidden value and quickly purchased it at a discount. He then was able to reforged the relic into the sword handle of a katana and renamed it, “Raiden”. (Retains all of its original attributes, with a minor aesthetic change to suit Shitou’s fighting style.)

{Sword of the Thunder God - OPEN - Item
The legendary sword of the Second Hokage. This sword is treated as having a permanent A-rank Raiton chakra flow.}

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Fighting Styles, Attributes, & Elements

Fighting Styles:

Major Skills:

-Kenjutsu - Expert, Reflex+3/Coordination+2 “Dragon Fang Style” {600 Cp}

-Taijutsu - Adept, Strength+3/Reflex+2; “Dragon Talon Style” {300 Cp}

Minor Skills:

Ijutsu - Adept {200 Cp}

Ninjutsu - Expert {500 Cp}

Metallurgy (Swordsmith) - Apprentice {200 Cp}

Attributes:

  • Strength: Proficient {450 Cp}
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  • Constitution: Proficient {450 Cp}
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  • Stamina: Masterful {1050 Cp}
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  • Reflex: Masterful {1050 Cp}
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  • Coordination: Masterful {1050 Cp}
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  • Wisdom: Proficient {450 Cp}

{4500 Cp}

Elements: 2 Basic, 1 Advanced

- Wind [500 Cp]

- Lightning [500 Cp]

- Sun (Taiton) [500 Cp]

Special Abilities:

Ancestral Akechi: Shirou has an unusual connection with the sun, which comes with an innate ability when he manipulates and maintains Sun Release chakra during the day. (Reduces amount of chakra needed for Sun Release jutsu by 1 Rank during the day.)

Solar Battery: Shirou enjoys the daylight hours and feels energized by the sun, even when indoors. (Minor advantage to strength during the day.)

Flaws:

Diurnal Clock: Shirou becomes weak and his energy is drained during the night. (Minor disadvantage to strength during the night.)

Cp

Bloodline Tax: 200 Cp

Skills: 1800 Cp

Attributes: 4500 Cp

Elements: 1500 Cp

Spent Character Points: 8000
Active Character Points: 0
Unspent Character Points: 0
Total Character Points: 8000

Might, Will, And Fate Points
  • Might: 2
  • Will: 1
  • Fate:2

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 Post subject: Re: Shirou-Akechi (WIP)
PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2018 2:57 pm 
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Hi, I know this is still a work in progress, but I figured I should warn you:

-Bukijutsu MoO (Katana)- Specialist [400 Cp]

This is not a valid choice for Master of One, as it specifies no swords, and the Katana is certainly a sword.

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Stats:
Str: Legendary
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary
Coo: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Ref: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

Skills:
Taijutsu Paragon
Fuuinjutsu Master
Ninjutsu Expert
Ijutsu Adept
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 Post subject: Re: Shirou-Akechi (WIP)
PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2018 6:01 am 
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Hey, thanks for the information, I accidentally misread the info for Bukijutsu. Think I’m getting close to done. Could you please look over my application over again and let me know if anything major needs to be corrected? Thanks!

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 Post subject: Re: Shirou-Akechi (WIP)
PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2018 9:56 am 
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5100 Stats

5300 Bloodline Tax

5500 Ijutsu Novice

5500 Metallurgy Apprentice

6000 Kenjutsu Specialist (Halved for Origin)

6300 Taijutsu Adept

6800 Wind

7300 Lightning

7800 Photon (Assuming that's from your as yet unapproved bloodline)



There's 200 missing?


[Draconic Regeneration: Having his own soul bonded with the sky dragon Shen-Long, also augmented Shirou’s natural healing ability. Shirou gained the ability to subconsciously regenerate from damage by infusing chakra into his wounds, stimulating his body’s enhanced healing factor. The amount that can be healed however is limited as only so much damage can be healed at once.]

^This is a (likely weaker but as yet uncodified) version of a Restricted. It's a no-go.

[Blade Signs [Ninkenjutsu]: Shirou is able to change various forms of his sword style, i.e. stance, form, grip, etc, along with specialized hand seals to shape his chakra; similar to shinobi’s basic handsigns. This ability allows Shirou to infuse his chakra natures into his attacks, however, this can only be used when trained in conjunction with specialized Kenjutsu.]

^This is a workaround for our Origin separation mechanic (better, in fact, than a Samurai with the Prodigy Restricted), and is also a no-go.

[Weapon Passion (Katana): Shirou only uses katanas and no other martial weapon under any circumstance. He also must have a katana on him at all times, even while he sleeps, lest he becomes filled with the worry and doubt to the point of losing all focus.]

^This is barely a Flaw. Unless your corresponding SA becomes very weak, it probably won't pass.

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Am I dead, now, here in the snow?


Stats:
Str: Legendary
Con: Masterful
Sta: Legendary
Coo: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Ref: Legendary (Godlike with Taijutsu)
Wis: Legendary (Godlike with Fuuinjutsu)

Skills:
Taijutsu Paragon
Fuuinjutsu Master
Ninjutsu Expert
Ijutsu Adept
Lay down, relax, come on how?
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 Post subject: Re: Shirou-Akechi (WIP)
PostPosted: Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:32 am 
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Alright, I have reworked my application, changed my origin, added skills, and balanced my attributes. Not sure if the changes to my special abilities are ok but I think I should be good to go.

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 Post subject: Re: Shirou-Akechi (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 6:13 am 
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Jounin spots in Konoha are full, sorry. Clan should be completed first as well.

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Cool info stuff found below:

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Welcome, human! Below you'll find my statistics, enjoy your stay..

Attributes:

Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
Mokuton
Suiton
Doton


Spent Character Points: 5000
Unspent Character Points: 0
Active Character Points: 5000


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