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PostPosted: Tue May 07, 2019 12:14 pm 
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Man, I’m disappointed that what I thought would be a straightforward fun little technique is proving so problematic. I could add a direct cp investment as well, and I guess I’d be willing to if that’s what it took, but that seems pretty excessive for what this technique is. Perhaps I should have been more explicit about these details in my original contract proposal but I didn’t forsee this as being problematic given what I did include. I have a tendency to paint in broad strokes. I’d been planning on having “spawn of glumpglump” as major summons once I hit 6000 which would be these awesome tentacled chelonian Monstrosities. Perhaps if i had gotten those approved first this texhnoque would have seemed more justified? In any case, I’m still hoping we can work out something approvable. As always, I am open to suggestions.

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Strength: proficient
Constitution: proficient
Stamina: proficient
Reflex: proficient+minor
Coordination: proficient
Wisdom: masterful+minor

Taijutsu Specialist: Feng Mo Chuan
Ninjutsu Expert: Non-Elemental Specialization
Fuuinjutsu Novice
Bukijutsu Novice: JoaT
Kuchiyose Adept: Celestial Chelonii Conclave


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PostPosted: Thu May 09, 2019 12:32 pm 
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Bump

1) can I get approval on skippy or do I need to make any changes?

2) can I add regen to existing summons as my CA have changed since their approval?

3) have my revisions to GlumpGlump’s Caress brought it to the realm of approvability? Or at least to the point where changes can be suggested?

Thanks!

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Strength: proficient
Constitution: proficient
Stamina: proficient
Reflex: proficient+minor
Coordination: proficient
Wisdom: masterful+minor

Taijutsu Specialist: Feng Mo Chuan
Ninjutsu Expert: Non-Elemental Specialization
Fuuinjutsu Novice
Bukijutsu Novice: JoaT
Kuchiyose Adept: Celestial Chelonii Conclave


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PostPosted: Sun May 12, 2019 5:16 pm 
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5-day bump...

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Strength: proficient
Constitution: proficient
Stamina: proficient
Reflex: proficient+minor
Coordination: proficient
Wisdom: masterful+minor

Taijutsu Specialist: Feng Mo Chuan
Ninjutsu Expert: Non-Elemental Specialization
Fuuinjutsu Novice
Bukijutsu Novice: JoaT
Kuchiyose Adept: Celestial Chelonii Conclave


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PostPosted: Sun May 12, 2019 5:42 pm 
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1.) Skippy is fine

2.) That was allowed when you swapped to regen

3.) My suggestion would be to change the technique entirely to avoid the issues multiple staff members have brought up to you.

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Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

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PostPosted: Sun May 12, 2019 5:51 pm 
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Thanks! I’ll put the tech on the back burner for now I suppose.

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Strength: proficient
Constitution: proficient
Stamina: proficient
Reflex: proficient+minor
Coordination: proficient
Wisdom: masterful+minor

Taijutsu Specialist: Feng Mo Chuan
Ninjutsu Expert: Non-Elemental Specialization
Fuuinjutsu Novice
Bukijutsu Novice: JoaT
Kuchiyose Adept: Celestial Chelonii Conclave


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PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2019 6:40 pm 
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Taking another stab at a technique and promise not to beat my head against the wall quite so thoroughly this time. It should be a pretty standard booster. As always open to suggestions if it isn't approveable as is but hopefully this one is at least in the right ballpark. Below is a pretty straightforward summons as well.

Name:Hare Race Jutsu
Rank: c
Cost: 5, upkeep 1
Range: personal
Type:[/b] ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity:n/a
Notation: Secret Technique of the celestial chelonii conclave
Handsigns:n/a
Lore/Flavor: designed to combat their eternal foes, the infernal hares, the celestial chelonii developed this technique to match, or at times even exceed their speed. By tapping into the latent energy afforded them by their celestial regeneration they are able to augment their nervous system to great effect. Human kyochose users may benefit from this technique only via their chelonian armor.
Description: gain 1 tier boost to reflex for the duration of the technique.
Drawbacks: increase the cost of all regeneration by 2 sp for the duration of the technique plus one post. Non-chelonii (such as humans) can only use this technique while also using armored transformation.

Name: Dorjeena “Dora;” Infant Spawn of Glump Glump
Rank: minor/C
Contract Abilities: Lightning, Flight, Regeneration

Description: This tiny tentacled snapping turtle is one of the direct offspring of Glump Glump, and thus greatly honored despite her young age. She is about 10 cm across and her appendages can extend 3 times that distance. Despite her prestigious birth, she has maintained a sweet and humble demeanor and is always happy to test her abilities for the benefit of her summoner. She is rather slow and weak given her young age so she generally prefers to cling to her summoner for safety and/or use transformation technique to disguise herself.
Attributes:
Strength: poor 0
Constitution:average 150
Reflex: poor+minor 50
Coordination: masterful 1050
Wisdom: masterful 1050

Techniques:
S: fangs of lightning 500
B: lightning rat violent quake 200
B: lightning release spider web 200
B: lightning release false darkness 200
C: chakra flow 100
E: transformation

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Strength: proficient
Constitution: proficient
Stamina: proficient
Reflex: proficient+minor
Coordination: proficient
Wisdom: masterful+minor

Taijutsu Specialist: Feng Mo Chuan
Ninjutsu Expert: Non-Elemental Specialization
Fuuinjutsu Novice
Bukijutsu Novice: JoaT
Kuchiyose Adept: Celestial Chelonii Conclave


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PostPosted: Mon May 13, 2019 9:12 pm 
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Taking another stab at a technique and promise not to beat my head against the wall quite so thoroughly this time. It should be a pretty standard booster. As always open to suggestions if it isn't approveable as is but hopefully this one is at least in the right ballpark. Below is a pretty straightforward summons as well.

Name:Hare Race Jutsu
Rank: c
Cost: 5, upkeep 1
Range: personal
Type:[/b] ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity:n/a
Notation: Secret Technique of the celestial chelonii conclave
Handsigns:n/a
Lore/Flavor: designed to combat their eternal foes, the infernal hares, the celestial chelonii developed this technique to match, or at times even exceed their speed. By tapping into the latent energy afforded them by their celestial regeneration they are able to augment their nervous system to great effect. Human kyochose users may benefit from this technique only via their chelonian armor.
Description: gain 1 tier boost to reflex for the duration of the technique.
Drawbacks: increase the cost of all regeneration by 2 sp for the duration of the technique plus one post. Non-chelonii (such as humans) can only use this technique while also using armored transformation.

Name: Dorjeena “Dora;” Infant Spawn of Glump Glump
Rank: minor/C
Contract Abilities: Lightning, Flight, Regeneration

Description: This tiny tentacled snapping turtle is one of the direct offspring of Glump Glump, and thus greatly honored despite her young age. She is about 10 cm across and her appendages can extend 3 times that distance. Despite her prestigious birth, she has maintained a sweet and humble demeanor and is always happy to test her abilities for the benefit of her summoner. She is rather slow and weak given her young age so she generally prefers to cling to her summoner for safety and/or use transformation technique to disguise herself.
Attributes:
Strength: poor 0
Constitution:average 150
Reflex: poor+minor 50
Coordination: masterful 1050
Wisdom: masterful 1050

Techniques:
S: fangs of lightning 500
B: lightning rat violent quake 200
B: lightning release spider web 200
B: lightning release false darkness 200
C: chakra flow 100
E: transformation


Sure

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Kyujutsu Master
Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 05, 2019 6:23 pm 
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This is basically a more versatile version of Hare Race which has already been approved. I upped the drawbacks to compensate for the increased versatility. Otherwise it is about the same so hopefully there aren't any major issues.

Name: Hare Race: Track and Field
Rank: variable
Cost: variable
Range: personal or summoned celestial chelonii
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation:Secret Technique
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: This is a more sophisticated version of the basic Hare Race technique. It is based on the same principals but refined in such a way as to allow fine motor control to be improved as well as speed. By tapping into the latent energy afforded them by their celestial regeneration the members of the Celestial Chelonii Conclave are able to augment their nervous system (or that of their summoner when under the effects of armored transformation) to achieve these effects. Human kyochose users may benefit from this technique only via their chelonian armor.
Description:
Depending on the rank at which this technique is used it provides varying advantages as shown below. Initial cost is standard for the given rank. Upkeep is 2 ranks lower than initial cost.

rank; Reflex/Coordination advantages; Regen Cost Increase
S 5/4 ... 5sp
A 4/3 ... 4sp
B 3/2 ... 3sp
C 2/1 ... 2sp

Drawbacks: As this technique is more powerful than the basic version its drawbacks are greater as well. Increase the cost of the relevant summon’s regeneration by a number of sp based on the level of the technique for the rest of the topic. humans can only use this technique while also using armored transformation. After using this technique for 4 rounds, each additional round incurs a cumulative minor disadvantage to constitution that persists for the rest of the topic

_________________
Strength: proficient
Constitution: proficient
Stamina: proficient
Reflex: proficient+minor
Coordination: proficient
Wisdom: masterful+minor

Taijutsu Specialist: Feng Mo Chuan
Ninjutsu Expert: Non-Elemental Specialization
Fuuinjutsu Novice
Bukijutsu Novice: JoaT
Kuchiyose Adept: Celestial Chelonii Conclave


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 07, 2019 8:23 pm 
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48 hour bump :)

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Strength: proficient
Constitution: proficient
Stamina: proficient
Reflex: proficient+minor
Coordination: proficient
Wisdom: masterful+minor

Taijutsu Specialist: Feng Mo Chuan
Ninjutsu Expert: Non-Elemental Specialization
Fuuinjutsu Novice
Bukijutsu Novice: JoaT
Kuchiyose Adept: Celestial Chelonii Conclave


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 07, 2019 11:09 pm 
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I don't see any reason why augmenting your nervous system would increase your strength.

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Welcome, human! Below you'll find my statistics, enjoy your stay..

Attributes:

Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
Mokuton
Suiton
Doton


Spent Character Points: 5000
Unspent Character Points: 0
Active Character Points: 5000


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PostPosted: Sun Jun 09, 2019 5:25 pm 
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This is basically a more versatile version of Hare Race which has already been approved. I upped the drawbacks to compensate for the increased versatility. Otherwise it is about the same so hopefully there aren't any major issues.

Name: Hare Race: Track and Field
Rank: variable
Cost: variable
Range: personal or summoned celestial chelonii
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation:Secret Technique
Handsigns: N/A
Lore/Flavor: This is a more sophisticated version of the basic Hare Race technique. It is based on the same principals but refined in such a way as to allow fine motor control to be improved as well as speed. By tapping into the latent energy afforded them by their celestial regeneration the members of the Celestial Chelonii Conclave are able to augment their nervous system (or that of their summoner when under the effects of armored transformation) to achieve these effects. Human kyochose users may benefit from this technique only via their chelonian armor.
Description:
Depending on the rank at which this technique is used it provides varying advantages as shown below. Initial cost is standard for the given rank. Upkeep is 2 ranks lower than initial cost.

rank; Reflex/Coordination advantages; Regen Cost Increase
S 5/4 ... 5sp
A 4/3 ... 4sp
B 3/2 ... 3sp
C 2/1 ... 2sp

Drawbacks: As this technique is more powerful than the basic version its drawbacks are greater as well. Increase the cost of the relevant summon’s regeneration by a number of sp based on the level of the technique for the rest of the topic. humans can only use this technique while also using armored transformation. After using this technique for 4 rounds, each additional round incurs a cumulative minor disadvantage to constitution that persists for the rest of the topic
approved

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Cool info stuff found below:

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Welcome, human! Below you'll find my statistics, enjoy your stay..

Attributes:

Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
Mokuton
Suiton
Doton


Spent Character Points: 5000
Unspent Character Points: 0
Active Character Points: 5000


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