Name: Adolescent Anthropomorphic Shinobi Terrapins: Earth Team Alpha
Contract Abilities: Flight, Earth
Description: These young members of the Chelonii Conclave are roughly human sized bipedal winged turtles who are trained to operate as a single unit of five. Any member separated from the rest is treated as an NPC. They are quite rambunctious and irreverent compared to their elders but make for competent allies. Plying them with food will result in enthusiasm and loyalty. This particular squad is armed with 1 bo-staff and 10 shuriken each.
Techniques: 500 pts worth
Whac-A-Mole Technique - C-Rank 100 pts
Rock Armor - B-Rank 200 pts
Earth Release: Rock Gun Technique - B-Rank 200 pts
CP Total: 4000
Name: Skarn, Terrapin Warrior
Contract Abilities: Flight, Lightening
Description: Skarn is a humanoid winged terrapin who is a Veteran of several battles. Now he trains adolescent winged terrapins to better serve the conclave. He is gruff yet warm, and doesn't hesitate to follow orders. He is equipped with a Katana and 5 Kunai.
Techniques: 350 pts worth
Body Flicker Technique | Shunshin no Jutsu – (D-Rank) 50
Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armor: B-Rank. 200
Chakra Flow - C-Rank 100
CP Total: 4000
Name: Silver Shelly the Elder Cloud Tortoise
Contract Abilities: Flight, Water
Description: This massive flying aspidochelone, whose mountaneous shell is covered in forest and meadow, is one of many that have been hibernating for centuries and may in fact never wake. However, she is able to subconsciously sense where her summoner desires her to go and will drift there with surprising speed. Silver Shelly will unconsciously avoid any collisions and, if somehow damaged in any significant way, will reflexively retreat to her home dimension regardless of remaining durability. This makes her useless in combat. Furthermore, her muscles are stiff and atrophied from centuries of use and at this point are good for little more than directing her huge mass along the air currents. A previous signatory of the Chelonii Conclave Contract had built a modest keep perched upon the apex of her shell. Her chakra-infused breath-vapor settles around her lower portions appearing as a fluffy cloud from the ground and sometimes enveloping her completely in a localized fog.
Techniques: 800 pts
Restful Cloud (see below) B rank 200 pts
Protective Bubble Dome - B-Rank (Silver Shellie's nostrils and mucus sub for a bubble pipe) 200
CP Total: 4,000
Name: The Supreme Turtle
Contract Abilities: Earth, Air, Fire, Flight
Description: This Kaiju sized turtle is regarded as honorary lord and defender of the Chelonii Conclave's dimension, though he usually keeps to himself and is only consulted in matters of the upmost urgency. He flies via a special fire jutsu.
CP Total: 10,000
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Overall, could you describe the size of these guys in actual measurements so we have an idea of how tall/heavy/etc.. they are?
First one, swarms (units) are things like a swarm of bees, a swarm of ants, things that wouldn't justify stats above like, poor as individuals. The first one could be 5 guys you have access to but not summoning five guys at once.
Second one, other than it's dimensions looks fine.
Third one, as long as it's understood that it still follows the rule where summons don't disperse until the end of your post then looks fine.
Boss, your guy is only an adept so until you get expert you can't create a boss for the contract.
Name: Armored Transformation
Rank: C-S, depending on chakra expenditure
Sub-type: Defensive, Supplementary, Summoning)
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Secret Technique, limited to the Celestial Chelonii Conclave.
Lore/Flavor: Similar to the Monkey King Enma's transformation into an adamantine staff, the members of the Celestial Chelonii Conclave practice a technique whereby they are transformed into a suit of armor in order to better protect their summoner.
Description: Via this technique, any given summons of the Celestial Chelonii Conclave may be summoned as a suit of armor or transform into a suit after being summoned. In either case, green slime extends from the summoners seal which quickly covers their entire body and takes the form of the armor. In the latter case, the summon disappears in a poof of smoke immediately before this occurs. This technique may be utilized on a given summon at any rank up to 1 higher than the summon's tier (for example, an A rank summon could be transformed bia this technique at S tier or below while a B rank would be limited to A rank or below). If a given summon subjected to this technique possesses winged flight, the summoner may chose to gain the benefits of this technique at -1 tier but with the addition of flight. While the suit of armor is customized to fit the user perfectly, human sized summoners can only utilize roughly human sized summons while giant sized summoners can only utilize giant sized summons with regards to this technique.
C: Total +2 Adv Con, +1 Adv Str
B: Total +3 Adv Con, +2 Adv Str
A: Total +4 Adv Con, +3 Adv Str
S: Total +5 Adv Con, +4 Adv Str
Drawbacks: The main drawbacks of this technique are the additional cost on top of the summoning cost and the loss of other utility from the summon using this technique. Furthermore, this technique is only useful for the normal duration of the summon used. Levels A and S are restricted to Kuchiyose Experts and Masters
Name: Restful Cloud
Range: 50 m radius rough sphere from user, usually only the bottom half but may be total.
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Notation: Secret Technique, only performable by Celestial Chelonii Conclave
Lore/Flavor: This technique ensures that the user has a restful sleep while drifting effortlessly through the sky.
Description: An instinctive technique used by the aerial aspidechelones of the celestial chelonii conclave. As they fall asleep they spend the required chakra which conjures a cloud under and around them. This cloud supports them as they drift and swim through they sky in a deep sleep, and lasts until they awaken. The cloud generated by this technique gradually takes on the characteristics of other nearby clouds as it is somewhat affected by atmospheric conditions.
Drawbacks: The main drawbacks of this technique are that it is basically a B rank technique for being lazy and sleeping well. Though it provides a visual screen, the user must remain asleep so it is virtually impossible to use in any kind of combat setting. If the user wakes, the cloud immediately begins dissipating. This technique also does not confer the ability to fly, it merely makes flight virtually effortless for one who can already do so.
Armored Transformation, Flight is something I don't think should be granted. As it seems when they become armor they lose the ability to be dispersed through damage, which means this just gives you the Flight Restricted. It also should require an upkeep cost as it constantly gives boosts to the user.
Restful Cloud, does this last until the summon decides to wake up? If that's the case this could be upward of 20 posts of flight for 10 SP. It should have an upkeep or a post limit, one of the two.