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 Post subject: Hanzō Haruno
PostPosted: Sat May 04, 2019 11:42 pm 
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Name: Hanzō Nara
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11
Weight: 162 lbs
Rank: Genin
Faction of Origin: Shinobi
Village: Konoha
Bloodline/Clan: Hyūga Lv. 4 (200+150+250+500=1100)
Restricted Loan Technique: None.

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Appearance: Hanzō benefits of a fairly unique hair color for one of his kin, sporting short-medium wavy white hair that is sometimes held up by a thin headband a few centimeters above his forehead. While his physique has not generally gifted him by any means and that he arbors a generic, skinny-tall silhouette accentuated by the sometimes skin-tight clothes he may wear on missions, the young Nara can most often be seen around the village wearing a long, one-piece cloak covering the entirety of his body from the neck-down, as can be evidenced by the gif above. In terms of facial features, Hanzō has dark green eyes that are much closer to black than anything else, his pupils almost blending into the color of his iris (hoping I'm not mixing any terms here). The rest of his face is very generic and exemplified well enough by the picture up above.

History:
A Konoha-nin, Hanzō grew up under the watchful eye of a Haruno father and a Hyūga mother, his family living in the middle-class residential areas of Konohagakure and being apart of the working class of the village. His father learned his trade as a chef in his more youthful years, before going out of business shortly after Hanzō's birth and taking a less prestigious path as a line cook for a run-off-the-mill ramen hotspot in the center of the village. His mother, a Hyūga who grew up in the clan's headquarters, was disinherited and shamed upon for the majority of her youth for never seeing her Byakugan develop, leading to failure to become a renowned ninja. The lady still became a decent shinobi, but never enough to make a living, and she quickly found a new path to follow that'd put food on the table, outside of day-to-day missions.

As for the younger Haruno, their one and only child, his childhood was as average as it could possibly be. His father suggested he joined the academy where his mother later taught, hoping he would be seduced by the concept of risking one's life for the greater good; instead, the pre-teen nurtured a firm belief of ninja as being pawns of higher-ups, and nothing more than fodder and glorified servants to the feudality. Regardless, the awakening of his bloodline trait at a young age stimulated interest in him, and encouraged the lad to further his knowledge and understanding of all techniques that may pertain to his rare doujutsu, a talent that his mother had failed to provide to her family. His belief stayed similar throughout his time as an academy student, and later on as a young genin, though he grew to be more fond of certain shinobi and the sheer willpower some of them had shown. One can only admire passion, especially passions like that of his peers, a passion which could not be ignored. His entourage hoped this passion would be ignited in him sooner or later, as for now he was only a shinobi due to it being what his parents liked to call "his default disposition".
Personality Traits: Charismatic. Calm. Independent. Sarcastic. Vulnerable.
Face Claim: Gintoki
Theme Song: This piece of genius, and this one too
Chakra Color: Chartreuse Green
Nindo: It won't kill ya, will it?
Character Preferences:
  • Likes: Money. Time. History.
  • Dislikes: Money. Paradoxes. Shortcuts.
  • Pastimes: Pachinko. Lowkey has a gambling addiction. Working on it.
  • Favorite foods: Huge fan of tea. And of whatever his mom cooks.
  • Sexual orientation: Straight.
Skills:
  • Taijutsu (M): Adept (300)
  • Genjutsu (M): Adept (200)
  • Ninjutsu (m): Expert (500)
  • Ijutsu (m): Adept (200)
Attributes:
  • Strength: Poor (0)
  • Constitution: Poor (0)
  • Stamina: Poor (0)
  • Reflex: Poor (0)
  • Coordination: Poor (0)
  • Wisdom: Poor (0)
Elements: Lightning (500), Wind (500), Water (700)

Spent Character Points: 4000
Active Character Points: 3100
Unspent Character Points: 0
Total Character Points: 3100

Special Abilities:
  • Underdog (a): Being considered an underdog has often led to Hanzō being a bit more motivated in fights, benefitting of real-life plot armour through motivation, resilience and a bit of despair at times. As such, when he is considered to be the underdog of the fight (lower active CP than his counterpart), Hanzō benefits of a major advantage to stamina, minor advantage to constitution.
  • One-handed seals (b): After lengthy and extended periods of training, Hanzō has developed the skill of using one-handed seals.
Flaws:
  • Spotlight Anxiety (a): However, being the underdog and having this resilience also incurs somewhat of a recklessness and creates spotlight anxiety (needing to perform and exceed expectations at a given moment). The Hyūga incurs a major disadvantage to reflexes, and a minor disadvantage to wisdom.
  • Slow Hand (b): For the purpose of using one-handed seals, coordination is affected by a one-tier deduction.

Might, Will, And Fate Points
  • Might:
  • Will:
  • Fate: 4


Last edited by Hanzo Haruno on Tue May 14, 2019 10:58 pm, edited 7 times in total.

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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Nara
PostPosted: Mon May 06, 2019 1:08 pm 
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Done. Hoping I didn't forget anything.


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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Nara
PostPosted: Mon May 06, 2019 4:13 pm 
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Your numbers aren't wrong but they're written wrong. Mainly Wind, as it is only your second element, costs 500 CP and then there's 200 CP for being in the Nara clan. That still comes out to 700 though so you're good on that. Genjutsu did just get a change though, so Adept in it only costs 200, you'll be refunded 100 CP.

As for your SAs, firstly none of them have corresponding flaws. The first one that grants an advantage to stamina has a flaw that gives you a minor disadvantage to coordination but only while using handseals. That doesn't affect taijutsu, genjutsu, or sealless techniques so essentially it's a free minor advantage. The second one is already very powerful and I should note that it won't stack with Fighting Styles, but I'd like to see it toned down to one Fighting Style. Likewise it's corresponding flaw doesn't matter once you reach certain CP thresholds and can just claim techniques for free. The last SA is one that was previously denied so you're going to have to rework it or come up with a new one, but it also lacks a balancing flaw. Two advantages for one disadvantage isn't equivalent and never buying a Fighting Style isn't a flaw as it was likely never going to be in a your build to begin with.

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Ninjutsu Expert
Kyujutsu Master
Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Nara
PostPosted: Mon May 06, 2019 5:36 pm 
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Your numbers aren't wrong but they're written wrong. Mainly Wind, as it is only your second element, costs 500 CP and then there's 200 CP for being in the Nara clan. That still comes out to 700 though so you're good on that. Genjutsu did just get a change though, so Adept in it only costs 200, you'll be refunded 100 CP.

As for your SAs, firstly none of them have corresponding flaws. The first one that grants an advantage to stamina has a flaw that gives you a minor disadvantage to coordination but only while using handseals. That doesn't affect taijutsu, genjutsu, or sealless techniques so essentially it's a free minor advantage. The second one is already very powerful and I should note that it won't stack with Fighting Styles, but I'd like to see it toned down to one Fighting Style. Likewise it's corresponding flaw doesn't matter once you reach certain CP thresholds and can just claim techniques for free. The last SA is one that was previously denied so you're going to have to rework it or come up with a new one, but it also lacks a balancing flaw. Two advantages for one disadvantage isn't equivalent and never buying a Fighting Style isn't a flaw as it was likely never going to be in a your build to begin with.
Updated the SAs and everything else. The SA (a) corresponds with SF (a), same for (b). Hope it's better now.


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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Nara
PostPosted: Tue May 07, 2019 1:05 am 
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The SA and Flaw (a) look fine now.

(b) is still not exactly balanced. I'd recommend all your canon techs to hit at a rank lower if you want all your customs to hit at a rank higher. Of course, this means that the ninjutsu fighting style cannot boost your canon jutsu either.

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Attributes:

Strength: Average
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful
Coordination: Average Minor
Reflexes: Proficient
Wisdom: Proficient

Fighting Styles:

Ninjutsu Specialist
Sensory Major

Elements:
Mokuton
Suiton
Doton


Spent Character Points: 5000
Unspent Character Points: 0
Active Character Points: 5000


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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Nara
PostPosted: Tue May 07, 2019 1:51 am 
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I ended up just removing (b) altogether. Should be all set now.


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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Nara
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Name: Hanzō Nara
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11
Weight: 162 lbs
Rank: Genin
Faction of Origin: Shinobi
Village: Konoha
Bloodline/Clan: Nara (200)
Restricted Loan Technique: None.

Image

Appearance: Hanzō benefits of a fairly unique hair color for one of his kin, sporting short-medium wavy white hair that is sometimes held up by a thin headband a few centimeters above his forehead. While his physique has not generally gifted him by any means and that he arbors a generic, skinny-tall silhouette accentuated by the sometimes skin-tight clothes he may wear on missions, the young Nara can most often be seen around the village wearing a long, one-piece cloak covering the entirety of his body from the neck-down, as can be evidenced by the gif above. In terms of facial features, Hanzō has dark green eyes that are much closer to black than anything else, his pupils almost blending into the color of his iris (hoping I'm not mixing any terms here). The rest of his face is very generic and exemplified well enough by the picture up above.

History:
A Konoha-nin, Hanzō would be what anyone would picture when thinking of someone who is, well, slightly greedy to say the least. The young Nara grew up in a household where his family was as basic as one would think of; happy family with some fights every now and then, with the sole exception that he was an only child (if that can even be considered non-basic nowadays). Very early on, he was encouraged to follow the path that would make him the most happy, yet the teenager was indifferent in regards to most career paths which were offered to him at that point.

His father suggested he joined the academy where his mother taught, and that he may be seduced by the idea of being a shinobi in the future if he experienced it first-hand. His experience at the academy was positive, and followed a relatively linear fashion—study there for a bit, make some friends, get promoted to genin status. He was especially fascinated with the history side of the shinobi world, and of the greats who had made a name for themselves in the past. But most importantly, he chose this career because it was one of the most lucrative available to him. It was fairly rare, still, a shinobi willing to risk his life for a couple ryo, but he was one of them regardless. And a pretty decent one at that, he hoped.
Personality Traits: Charismatic. Calm. Independent. Sarcastic. Vulnerable.
Face Claim: Gintoki
Theme Song: This piece of genius, and this one too
Chakra Color: Chartreuse Green
Nindo: It won't kill ya, will it?
Character Preferences:
  • Likes: Money. Very much so.
  • Dislikes: Shortcuts. Hates to see people taking them.
  • Pastimes: Pachinko. Lowkey has a gambling addiction. Working on it.
  • Favorite foods: Huge fan of tea.
  • Sexual orientation: Straight.
Skills:
  • Taijutsu (M): Adept (300)
  • Genjutsu (M): Adept (200)
  • Kuchiyose (m): Expert (500)
  • Ninjutsu (m): Expert (500)
  • Ijutsu (m): Adept (200)
Attributes:
  • Strength: Poor (0)
  • Constitution: Poor (0)
  • Stamina: Average (150)
  • Reflex: Poor (0)
  • Coordination: Poor (0)
  • Wisdom: Average (150)
Elements: Lightning (500), Wind (500), Water (700)

Spent Character Points: 3900
Active Character Points: 3900
Unspent Character Points: 100
Total Character Points: 4000

Special Abilities:
  • Underdog (a): Being considered an underdog has often led to Hanzō being a bit more motivated in fights, benefitting of real-life plot armour through motivation, resilience and a bit of despair at times. As such, when he is considered to be the underdog of the fight (lower active CP than his counterpart), Hanzō benefits of a major advantage to stamina, minor advantage to constitution.
Flaws:
  • Spotlight Anxiety (a): However, being the underdog and having this resilience also incurs somewhat of a recklessness and creates spotlight anxiety (needing to perform and exceed expectations at a given moment). The Nara incurs a major disadvantage to reflexes, and a minor disadvantage to wisdom.

Might, Will, And Fate Points
  • Might:
  • Will:
  • Fate: 4
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Ninjutsu Expert
Kyujutsu Master
Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

Wind
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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Haruno
PostPosted: Tue May 14, 2019 10:18 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Haruno
PostPosted: Tue May 14, 2019 10:26 pm 
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Your TCP is wrong, TCP is always Active + Unspent

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Ninjutsu Expert
Kyujutsu Master
Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

Wind
Lightning
Water


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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Haruno
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Your TCP is wrong, TCP is always Active + Unspent
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 Post subject: Re: Hanzō Haruno
PostPosted: Tue May 14, 2019 11:02 pm 
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Name: Hanzō Nara
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11
Weight: 162 lbs
Rank: Genin
Faction of Origin: Shinobi
Village: Konoha
Bloodline/Clan: Hyūga Lv. 4 (200+150+250+500=1100)
Restricted Loan Technique: None.

Image

Appearance: Hanzō benefits of a fairly unique hair color for one of his kin, sporting short-medium wavy white hair that is sometimes held up by a thin headband a few centimeters above his forehead. While his physique has not generally gifted him by any means and that he arbors a generic, skinny-tall silhouette accentuated by the sometimes skin-tight clothes he may wear on missions, the young Nara can most often be seen around the village wearing a long, one-piece cloak covering the entirety of his body from the neck-down, as can be evidenced by the gif above. In terms of facial features, Hanzō has dark green eyes that are much closer to black than anything else, his pupils almost blending into the color of his iris (hoping I'm not mixing any terms here). The rest of his face is very generic and exemplified well enough by the picture up above.

History:
A Konoha-nin, Hanzō grew up under the watchful eye of a Haruno father and a Hyūga mother, his family living in the middle-class residential areas of Konohagakure and being apart of the working class of the village. His father learned his trade as a chef in his more youthful years, before going out of business shortly after Hanzō's birth and taking a less prestigious path as a line cook for a run-off-the-mill ramen hotspot in the center of the village. His mother, a Hyūga who grew up in the clan's headquarters, was disinherited and shamed upon for the majority of her youth for never seeing her Byakugan develop, leading to failure to become a renowned ninja. The lady still became a decent shinobi, but never enough to make a living, and she quickly found a new path to follow that'd put food on the table, outside of day-to-day missions.

As for the younger Haruno, their one and only child, his childhood was as average as it could possibly be. His father suggested he joined the academy where his mother later taught, hoping he would be seduced by the concept of risking one's life for the greater good; instead, the pre-teen nurtured a firm belief of ninja as being pawns of higher-ups, and nothing more than fodder and glorified servants to the feudality. Regardless, the awakening of his bloodline trait at a young age stimulated interest in him, and encouraged the lad to further his knowledge and understanding of all techniques that may pertain to his rare doujutsu, a talent that his mother had failed to provide to her family. His belief stayed similar throughout his time as an academy student, and later on as a young genin, though he grew to be more fond of certain shinobi and the sheer willpower some of them had shown. One can only admire passion, especially passions like that of his peers, a passion which could not be ignored. His entourage hoped this passion would be ignited in him sooner or later, as for now he was only a shinobi due to it being what his parents liked to call "his default disposition".
Personality Traits: Charismatic. Calm. Independent. Sarcastic. Vulnerable.
Face Claim: Gintoki
Theme Song: This piece of genius, and this one too
Chakra Color: Chartreuse Green
Nindo: It won't kill ya, will it?
Character Preferences:
  • Likes: Money. Time. History.
  • Dislikes: Money. Paradoxes. Shortcuts.
  • Pastimes: Pachinko. Lowkey has a gambling addiction. Working on it.
  • Favorite foods: Huge fan of tea. And of whatever his mom cooks.
  • Sexual orientation: Straight.
Skills:
  • Taijutsu (M): Adept (300)
  • Genjutsu (M): Adept (200)
  • Ninjutsu (m): Expert (500)
  • Ijutsu (m): Adept (200)
Attributes:
  • Strength: Poor (0)
  • Constitution: Poor (0)
  • Stamina: Poor (0)
  • Reflex: Poor (0)
  • Coordination: Poor (0)
  • Wisdom: Poor (0)
Elements: Lightning (500), Wind (500), Water (700)

Spent Character Points: 4000
Active Character Points: 3100
Unspent Character Points: 0
Total Character Points: 3100

Special Abilities:
  • Underdog (a): Being considered an underdog has often led to Hanzō being a bit more motivated in fights, benefitting of real-life plot armour through motivation, resilience and a bit of despair at times. As such, when he is considered to be the underdog of the fight (lower active CP than his counterpart), Hanzō benefits of a major advantage to stamina, minor advantage to constitution.
  • One-handed seals (b): After lengthy and extended periods of training, Hanzō has developed the skill of using one-handed seals.
Flaws:
  • Spotlight Anxiety (a): However, being the underdog and having this resilience also incurs somewhat of a recklessness and creates spotlight anxiety (needing to perform and exceed expectations at a given moment). The Hyūga incurs a major disadvantage to reflexes, and a minor disadvantage to wisdom.
  • Slow Hand (b): For the purpose of using one-handed seals, coordination is affected by a one-tier deduction.

Might, Will, And Fate Points
  • Might:
  • Will:
  • Fate: 4

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Ninjutsu Expert
Kyujutsu Master
Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

Wind
Lightning
Water


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