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 Post subject: Kazahana, Tanjiro
PostPosted: Tue Jul 09, 2019 11:26 pm 
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Name: Kazahana, Tanjiro
Age: 15 Years Old.
Gender: Male.
Height: 5,6.
Weight: 125 lbs.
Rank: Genin.
Faction of Origin: Shinobi
Village: Kirigakure.
Bloodline/Clan:Kazahana Clan [200]
Restricted Loan Technique: N/A

Appearance: Tanjiro has burgundy hair combed back and dark eyes with a scar on the top left of his forehead. He wears long rectangular earrings with a sun symbol and a checkered black and green pattern haori over the standard ninja uniform.
History: This story takes place before the birth of Tanjiro Kazahana and beginning with his parents Suki Kazahana and Yokuza Kazahana two well known shinobis in kirigakure his mother was a lovely woman kind and respectful and a Chunnin while his father was a serious and loyal Jounin. They got to know each other while in a mission Suki was a genin at the age of 15 while Yokuza was a chunnin for that mission with another genin known as Akito an escort mission from kirigakure to a small island near by as they escord a messenger to his village. This mission is what brought them together and what made there bond but it was a mission when Suki was a Chunnin and Yokuza was a Tokubetsū Jounin that made there bond grow stronger and to start dating a few years later Yokuza became a jounin and Suki was pregnant with Tanjiro.

Tanjiro started the academy around 6 years old at a good age he was a good student and a kind person. He would always be on time to classes and made friends hes kindness made people feel harm and wanted plus he was good with weapon thanks to his father and pretty decent at Ninjutsu which he trained with his teacher and father. Tanjiro was really good with water techniques than wind techniques but he was great with Ice release he was both his parents. He took his genin exam and passed it showing flying color's hes determination to become like his parent over came any doubt or concerns that anyone would bring. As a Genin he was a member of the seven swordsmen and thought he was really cool and from that day on forward he wanted to become one.
Personality Traits: Tanjiro is kind by nature and has been described by others as having very gentle eyes. He has a great deal of determination and will not give up once he has a goal to achieve. Even though he is relatively strong on his own, he isn't opposed to asking others for help when he needs it. He is very protective of his friends and even more so of his younger sister. His most important attribute is his ability to empathize with anyone, even other nations. This often gives him hesitation when killing. However, this trait also could make some traitor/Rogue to redeem themselves moments before death, albeit rarely.
For the years of his service and amount of experience he faced, he became more calculating and strict in his decision. His courage to protect the weak committed him to face his enemy with respect and dignity whether good or evil.
Face Claim: Tanjiro Kamado Demon Slayer.
Theme Song: Violet Silence
Chakra Color: Azure
Nindo: "I won't give up so easily, I need to keep going to achieve my goal"
Character Preferences:
  • Likes: Training (Alone or with people), Girls, Food (Specially sea food), Going on missions, Writting, Reading, Long walks, Being with friends.
  • Dislikes: Boring Conversations, Traitors, Loudmouth, Self Absorbed People, Needles, Huanted places, Rejection.
  • Goals: To become a member of the Seven swordsman, To become the Mizukage, To become the strongest in all Kirigakure, To be Recognized by the entire world.
  • Sexual Preferences: Bisexual.


Skills:
  • Kenjutsu: Adept (300)
    Ninjutsu: Adept (200)
Attributes:
  • Strength: Proficient. (450)
  • Constitution: Proficient. (450)
  • Stamina: Proficient. (450)
  • Reflex: Average. (150)
  • Coordination: Average. (150)
  • Wisdom: Average.(150)
Elements: Suiton (500)
Futon (500)
Hyouton (500)
Spent Character Points: 4,000
Active Character Points: 4,000
Unspent Character Points: 0
Total Character Points: 4,000

Special Abilities: Ice cold: When Tanjiro is in combat his chakra become wild and cold which lowers the opponent reflex by major advantage within 10 meter from him.

Flaws: Frozen cold: Tanjiro's chakra is so cold and wild that even he can't control it which lowers his stamina by a major advantage.

Might, Will, And Fate Points
  • Might: 1
  • Will: 1
  • Fate: 2

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 Post subject: Re: Kazahana, Tanjiro
PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2019 6:34 pm 
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So first off Bukijutsu is a Major Skill, so an Adept in it costs 300 and Ninjutsu is a Minor Skill so an Expert costs 500. The costs for skills can be found here. Secondly, Average in a stat costs 150. The costs for Attributes can be found here. Third, Hyouton would also require a 500 CP investment in order to purchase. Lastly, for the first SA when you say casting techniques while attacking, what exactly do you mean by that? Like, can he throw a punch while doing handsigns or something? The second SA's Flaw doesn't really balance the SA itself. You get 25% off when training alone but only 25% more when begin taught by someone else, the latter of which is very uncommon while the former is something you can do whenever. Maybe do something that your Class thresholds that say you can learn techniques of X-rank without WC is 500 more or something? Just an idea.

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Ninjutsu Expert
Kyujutsu Master
Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

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 Post subject: Re: Kazahana, Tanjiro
PostPosted: Sat Jul 13, 2019 12:20 am 
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Bump should be better now.

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 Post subject: Re: Kazahana, Tanjiro
PostPosted: Sat Jul 13, 2019 3:00 pm 
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Tier SAs are unfortunately not something that is allowed, you'll have to tweak you numbers on it.

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Ninjutsu Expert
Kyujutsu Master
Fuuinjutsu Specialist
Sensory Expert

Strength: Proficient w/Minor (Epic w/Kyujutsu)
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Reflexes: Masterful (Major Advantage w/Sensory)
Coordination: Epic (Major Advantage w/Kyujutsu, Major Advantage w/Ninjutsu, Major Advantage w/Sensory, Legendary w/Drawing)
Wisdom: Masterful (Epic w/Fuinjutsu)

Wind
Lightning
Water


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 Post subject: Re: Kazahana, Tanjiro
PostPosted: Sat Jul 13, 2019 3:35 pm 
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Sorry fixed that

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 Post subject: Re: Kazahana, Tanjiro
PostPosted: Sat Jul 13, 2019 5:21 pm 
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I've came to take a look and there's actually a problem with the SA/Flaw. While possible to write it to something else, it is not really balanced because you don't lose anything while the SA is active. You could make the debuff apply to yourself too while it's active, but you don't really lose anything if you're just upset or angry for an entire topic.

Everything else looks good!

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Specialist Fūinjutsu
Specialist MoO Bukijutsu [Spears]
Expert Ninjutsu
Expert Sensory
Expert Ijutsu
Master Craftsman Chemistry

Strength: Average (Major Adv. Buki)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful (60 Ijutsu pool, 60 Ninjutsu pool)
Reflexes: Masterful w/ Major Adv. (Major Adv. Evasion with Sensing Technique)
Coordination: Masterful (Tier while Drawing, Major Adv. aiming at vital organs, Major Adv. for aiming ninjutsu, Major Adv. Buki, Major Adv. Evasion with Sensing Technique)
Wisdom: Proficient (+1 Tier Buki, +1 Tier Fūinjutsu)

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 Post subject: Re: Kazahana, Tanjiro
PostPosted: Sat Jul 13, 2019 5:34 pm 
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This should be a better SA flaw

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 Post subject: Re: Kazahana, Tanjiro
PostPosted: Sat Jul 13, 2019 5:36 pm 
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Yep! Approved!

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Specialist Fūinjutsu
Specialist MoO Bukijutsu [Spears]
Expert Ninjutsu
Expert Sensory
Expert Ijutsu
Master Craftsman Chemistry

Strength: Average (Major Adv. Buki)
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Masterful (60 Ijutsu pool, 60 Ninjutsu pool)
Reflexes: Masterful w/ Major Adv. (Major Adv. Evasion with Sensing Technique)
Coordination: Masterful (Tier while Drawing, Major Adv. aiming at vital organs, Major Adv. for aiming ninjutsu, Major Adv. Buki, Major Adv. Evasion with Sensing Technique)
Wisdom: Proficient (+1 Tier Buki, +1 Tier Fūinjutsu)

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